Poetry Forum Areas

Introduce Yourself

New to PoetrySoup? Introduce yourself here. Tell us something about yourself.

Looking for a Poem

Can't find a poem you've read before? Looking for a poem for a special person or an occasion? Ask other member for help.

Writing Poetry

Ways to improve your poetry. Post your techniques, tips, and creative ideas how to write better.

High Critique

For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!

How do I...?

Ask PoetrySoup Members how to do something or find something on PoetrySoup.


On Jilliby Farm

Suzanne Delaney Avatar Suzanne Delaney - LIFETIME Premium Member Suzanne Delaney - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled On Jilliby Farm which was written by poet Suzanne Delaney. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Suzanne Delaney

Best Suzanne Delaney Poems

+ Follow Poet

The poem is below.


On Jilliby Farm

Each night a brown orb spider,
a piece of night from under the eaves
spins a sticky intricate web
against the silhouette of leaves

 Kangaroos the color of bark and stones
 begin  a dawn retreat to a rose lit tree line
 I peep from the window- stretch and yawn
 as grey mist fades into spreading sunshine 
myriads of birdsong in filtered zones 
 as dew reveals gossamer webs on the lawn.

Tiny finches are flitting down, 
from twig to twig to a birdbath of stone
They dip and splash and re -alight, 
as I sit and watch in my dressing gown.
not moving in case I give them a fright
absorbed in them I am least alone
Their colors are grey, green, and caramel brown

Rain scents of earth and eucalypts
a bush path strewn with bark and puddles
under swaying strands of weeping leaves
aware of the tapestry nature weaves
In shadows and niches of scented idyls




Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
Date: 2/16/2016 5:22:00 PM
Impressive Human Nature-4 stanza,/7 lines..Congrats on your winner..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 2/16/2016 1:58:00 AM
Congrats on ur great win with this awesome write Suzanne!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/14/2016 3:02:00 PM
This is so rich in imagery and content SuZ. Congratulations on your second placement. I so hope you will post this at PFT. Happy Valentine's Day my friend! #7 hugs, Connie
Login to Reply
Date: 2/13/2016 7:40:00 PM
Congratulations on this awesome win! Very nice.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/12/2016 10:18:00 PM
Suz, thanks for supporting my comment
Login to Reply
Date: 2/12/2016 5:51:00 PM
Suz, congrats on your lovely win. LINDA
Login to Reply
Delaney Avatar
Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/12/2016 9:07:00 PM
Thanks so much Linda: I enjoyed writing this one. Memories of my time in Australia. SuZ
Date: 2/12/2016 4:39:00 PM
well done, and congratulations on this one, Suzanne.
Login to Reply
Delaney Avatar
Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/12/2016 9:08:00 PM
Thanks Lin: I appreciate you stopping by. SuZ
Date: 1/31/2016 11:53:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Suzanne. You have created a fantastic imagery of Australian nature. I have not been to Dooralong Valley, but the imagery reminds me of Kangaroo Valley. Best wishes for the contest. T.J
Login to Reply
Delaney Avatar
Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/12/2016 9:09:00 PM
Hi TJ: I always miss the Flora and Fauna of OZ. SuZ
Date: 1/29/2016 9:32:00 AM
- A great poem ...... - Good luck in the contest, hoping you'll win - I wish you a wonderful weekend Suzanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Delaney Avatar
Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/29/2016 10:20:00 AM
Thanks so much, Anne Lisa for reading a commenting. So glad you could share my nature scenes. Hugs, SuZ