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On Jilliby Farm

Each night a brown orb spider, a piece of night from under the eaves spins a sticky intricate web against the silhouette of leaves Kangaroos the color of bark and stones begin a dawn retreat to a rose lit tree line I peep from the window- stretch and yawn as grey mist fades into spreading sunshine myriads of birdsong in filtered zones as dew reveals gossamer webs on the lawn. Tiny finches are flitting down, from twig to twig to a birdbath of stone They dip and splash and re -alight, as I sit and watch in my dressing gown. not moving in case I give them a fright absorbed in them I am least alone Their colors are grey, bright green, and brown Rain scents of earth and eucalypts a bush path strewn with bark and puddles under swaying strands of weeping leaves in shadowy niches of scented idyls aware of the tapestry nature weaves HUMAN NATURE - 4 STANZA, 7 LINE Contest Judged: 2/12/2016 12:00:00 AM Sponsored by: Marugu Mo 2.nd Place

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Date: 5/28/2021 4:42:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Suzanne ~
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Date: 2/16/2016 5:22:00 PM
Impressive Human Nature-4 stanza,/7 lines..Congrats on your winner..Sara
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Date: 2/16/2016 1:58:00 AM
Congrats on ur great win with this awesome write Suzanne!
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Date: 2/14/2016 3:02:00 PM
This is so rich in imagery and content SuZ. Congratulations on your second placement. I so hope you will post this at PFT. Happy Valentine's Day my friend! #7 hugs, Connie
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Date: 2/13/2016 7:40:00 PM
Congratulations on this awesome win! Very nice.
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Date: 2/12/2016 10:18:00 PM
Suz, thanks for supporting my comment
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Date: 2/12/2016 5:51:00 PM
Suz, congrats on your lovely win. LINDA
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/12/2016 9:07:00 PM
Thanks so much Linda: I enjoyed writing this one. Memories of my time in Australia. SuZ
Date: 2/12/2016 4:39:00 PM
well done, and congratulations on this one, Suzanne.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/12/2016 9:08:00 PM
Thanks Lin: I appreciate you stopping by. SuZ
Date: 1/29/2016 9:32:00 AM
- A great poem ...... - Good luck in the contest, hoping you'll win - I wish you a wonderful weekend Suzanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/29/2016 10:20:00 AM
Thanks so much, Anne Lisa for reading a commenting. So glad you could share my nature scenes. Hugs, SuZ

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