On Jilliby Farm

Each night a brown orb spider,
a piece of night from under the eaves
spins a sticky intricate web
against the silhouette of leaves

 Kangaroos the color of bark and stones
 begin  a dawn retreat to a rose lit tree line
 I peep from the window- stretch and yawn
 as grey mist fades into spreading sunshine 
myriads of birdsong in filtered zones 
 as dew reveals gossamer webs on the lawn.

Tiny finches are flitting down, 
from twig to twig to a birdbath of stone
They dip and splash and re -alight, 
as I sit and watch in my dressing gown.
not moving in case I give them a fright
absorbed in them I am least alone
Their colors are grey, bright green, and brown

Rain scents of earth and eucalypts
a bush path strewn with bark and puddles
under swaying strands of weeping leaves
in shadowy niches of scented idyls
aware of the tapestry nature weaves


HUMAN NATURE - 4 STANZA, 7 LINE
Contest Judged:  2/12/2016 12:00:00 AM
Sponsored by: Marugu Mo 
2.nd Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gauthier Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 4:42 PM
Lovely imagery, Suzanne ~
Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 5:22 PM
Impressive Human Nature-4 stanza,/7 lines..Congrats on your winner..Sara
A. Sharma Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 1:58 AM
Congrats on ur great win with this awesome write Suzanne!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 3:02 PM
This is so rich in imagery and content SuZ. Congratulations on your second placement. I so hope you will post this at PFT. Happy Valentine's Day my friend! #7 hugs, Connie
Gentry Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 7:40 PM
Congratulations on this awesome win! Very nice.
A   Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 10:18 PM
Suz, thanks for supporting my comment
A   Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 5:51 PM
Suz, congrats on your lovely win. LINDA
Delaney Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 9:07 PM
Thanks so much Linda: I enjoyed writing this one. Memories of my time in Australia. SuZ
Lane Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 4:39 PM
well done, and congratulations on this one, Suzanne.
Delaney Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 9:08 PM
Thanks Lin: I appreciate you stopping by. SuZ
Andresen Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 9:32 AM
- A great poem ...... - Good luck in the contest, hoping you'll win - I wish you a wonderful weekend Suzanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Delaney Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 10:20 AM
Thanks so much, Anne Lisa for reading a commenting. So glad you could share my nature scenes. Hugs, SuZ
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