David Kavanagh Poet Quatrain

Human Mite Sight

How long is a short time, a hairs breadth above never 
Seen within one eye blink, the lash will move forever 
Perception throws curveball's, upon prismatic minds
Yet outside double slits, life-forms live completely blind 

And voracious appetites, strip eyelashes of girth 
Feeding on sebaceous oil, dines parasitic birth 
Nibbling away, watching reality slip from sight
Getting up close and personal, with demodex mites 

Making much from little, aiming to create new worlds 
Eyelashes warp under pressure, turn inward and curl 
Scratching the surface, observation now semi-blurred 
Eyeballs driving us crazy, itch cannot be demurred 

Lice-like creatures, slither up and down paying no tax 
Using eyelids as havens, in remorseless attacks 
Recombobulating dead skin, not the stuff of dreams 
We rip earths orb to shreds daily, in monster machines

By 
David Kavanagh 
16x13

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I Am Anaya October 28, 2022 at 6:48 PM Only a louse keeps on extracting from earth knowing of the harm it causes. Lice are plentiful there is always another louse to take its place. Your poem like a riddle, fascinating! David Kavanagh October 29, 2022 at 12:57 AM Thank you Anaya, a metaphorical riddle perhaps, I like to get the reader thinking sometimes most of the time, but you’re so right, always another louse to take another’s place, in this case living off each other and the damage unseen til recently, cheers David

Sam Kauffman October 28, 2022 at 12:18 PM David, wonderful use of the eye metaphor to convey your vision of shortsighted, greedy people who "rip earth's orb to shreds daily" in the blink of an eye. Your images are masterfully crafted and effectively carry your wise message. Thank you for sharing this gem! Blessings! Cheers! David Kavanagh October 28, 2022 at 12:51 PM Hey Sam, good to hear from you, all metaphoric of course, but nonetheless truthful, so much is hidden within plain sight, so close in fact, we need to zoom out and see clearly the big parasitic picture and nature of greed, not an easy read, thank you for understanding and commenting, cheers David

Tom Cunningham October 28, 2022 at 10:35 AM Ive heard about them creatures, I suppose like every living thing we're part of the food chain, makes you want to shower in bleach or jeyes fluid lol. Enjoy your weekend David. Tom David Kavanagh October 28, 2022 at 10:52 AM Tea tree oil, is supposed to keep them at bay, always about the oil isn’t it Tom lol, Trump would be delighted at your bleach comment, no really I’ve a bigger picture embedded as you well know, yeah a long weekend here, hope you enjoy yours too, cheers David

Jenna Logan October 28, 2022 at 10:24 AM Your points are well-driven, David. We live in a parasitic world, being eaten alive by tiny creatures and feeding off each other... greedy for another bite to bring one another down. I feel an overwhelming need to change my sheets and shower for a really long time. I enjoy all your poetry, particularly the longer one, where I can grasp a bit more of your depth. David Kavanagh October 28, 2022 at 10:47 AM Ha I apologise Jenna, this one is designed to get under the skin, you totally understand my intentions here, so much more going on around us and on us, that we actually become blinded and inured to it, I just try open peoples eyes, and give them something to think about, perhaps whilst my own are shut, cheers David