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Human Hyenas

From the time of creation
Adam was brainwashed into
 Believing that he was the brainiac
Behind the Garden of Eden fictions

 Women got tired of men carefree life styles
They laid back personality, they sanctions,
And Most of all they diminished sex drives
It’s too late now, it’s too late now 

Too many wrongs, not enough rights
This world belongs to everyone
Not only Your average Tom, Dick and Harry
Men and women have lost respect for each other.
It’s no longer a man’s world theatrical standards
It's more of a mad, mad world with so much mental attitudes
“I was on first; “I was here first kind of society 

Some of us are human hyenas that 
take advantage in human suffering
Not so hard to believe… but it is the truth.
however, it is so hard to swallow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/27/2012 11:56:00 PM
great poem,,, you pin point a few things ,,,, very awesome words you've pinned,,,, I read below you were in Sandy" ;{ Same day as sandy ,there was 7. 7 quake here on west coast ,, they put out Tsunami warning for the whole west coast. Today is starting another 3 storms .
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Date: 11/3/2012 1:52:00 AM
Hi Annie. Brilliant analysis of the humans turned hyenas. Like how you said it's a mad world. Men and women have gotten their minds jumbled with modern day philosophies and now it's everyone for themselves. Sorry about the hurricane. Hope you stay safe.
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Date: 10/30/2012 1:02:00 PM
I appreciate your frustration subsequent to rejecting the perfection that is life - struggle is our blessing my friend - peace has no place in a world of joyous pain - J.A.B. %
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Date: 10/30/2012 8:23:00 AM
A pleasure to sit and read poetry this morning. We are getting snow from the Hurricane and the cold northern air coming down from Canada here is Piqua, Ohio this morning. I am glad your excellent poem was one that I came across to read. I hope you are having a good day and if you are in the mist of this weather that you are safe and remain safe Annie. Love, Carol
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Annie Lander
Date: 10/30/2012 8:29:00 AM
Thank you Carol. here in Newyork we are underwater this morning.. Sandy aftermath , the damages, the stress, all i can do i to compose.. it is so sad ..

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