Human Folly

Forests are felled There once dwelled life - Now quelled by greed. Pulp to paper - The razor tears Through curtained flesh Let’s laud our wit - Bark - on it.. We have writ ‘Save trees’! ------------------------------------------------------------- Than-Bauk (Non Staircased) Internal rhyme

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/16/2016 6:34:00 AM

Than-Bauk written in style..Congrats on your winner..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2016 5:43:00 PM

Sneha, Congrats on your win in "Marugu MO's contest." Wuv ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2016 7:01:00 PM

very well done, Sneha. Congrats on your top win.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/12/2016 2:21:00 AM

Wow, Sneha. Very impressive than-bauk. Were I not informed, beforehand, that it was a particular form, I barely would have noticed the rhymes .... very natural sounding. Cool subject matter .... I always found it also ironic how Dr. Seus' The Lorax (an environmentalist book) has cut down trees to spread its message! A much deserved top spot in the contest!

James Inman

Date: 3/11/2016 10:51:00 AM

Great write Sneha, very clever.

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/11/2016 9:40:00 AM

Congratulations on a well thought subject! And a great win !

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/11/2016 8:52:00 AM

I am most impressed with your poem. A well-deserved 1st place win ... CayCay

Sathya Babu

Date: 3/11/2016 8:31:00 AM

Sneha Many congratulations on this fantastic WIN....

Jan Allison

Date: 3/11/2016 8:16:00 AM

wonderful message and a fabulous win Sneha:-) hugs Jan xx

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/11/2016 7:29:00 AM

Hi Sneha, Congratulations on your first place win in the contest. I liked the message and the wit within, excellent work....Vlad. A 7 for this write.

Sneha Rv
Date: 3/11/2016 7:40:00 AM