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Human Folly

Forests are felled
There once dwelled life -
Now quelled by greed.

Pulp to paper -
The razor tears
Through curtained flesh

Let’s laud our wit -
Bark - on it.. We
have writ   ‘Save trees’!


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Than-Bauk (Non Staircased) 
Internal rhyme

Copyright © Sneha Rv | Year Posted 2016

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Sara Kendrick Date: 3/16/2016 6:34:00 AM Than-Bauk written in style..Congrats on your winner..Sara Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/15/2016 5:43:00 PM Sneha, Congrats on your win in "Marugu MO's contest." Wuv ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/13/2016 7:01:00 PM very well done, Sneha. Congrats on your top win. Login to Reply

Timothy Hicks Date: 3/12/2016 2:21:00 AM Wow, Sneha. Very impressive than-bauk. Were I not informed, beforehand, that it was a particular form, I barely would have noticed the rhymes .... very natural sounding. Cool subject matter .... I always found it also ironic how Dr. Seus' The Lorax (an environmentalist book) has cut down trees to spread its message! A much deserved top spot in the contest! Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 3/11/2016 10:51:00 AM Great write Sneha, very clever. Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 3/11/2016 9:40:00 AM Congratulations on a well thought subject! And a great win ! Login to Reply

CayCay Jennings Date: 3/11/2016 8:52:00 AM I am most impressed with your poem. A well-deserved 1st place win ... CayCay Login to Reply

Sathya Babu Date: 3/11/2016 8:31:00 AM Sneha Many congratulations on this fantastic WIN.... Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 3/11/2016 8:16:00 AM wonderful message and a fabulous win Sneha:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 3/11/2016 7:29:00 AM Hi Sneha, Congratulations on your first place win in the contest. I liked the message and the wit within, excellent work....Vlad. A 7 for this write. Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 3/11/2016 7:40:00 AM Thanks a lot!! Glad you liked it!! :) :)

Sandra Haight Date: 3/11/2016 6:52:00 AM Sneha, my heartfelt congratulations to you for your First Place win! Fine words and imagery of wisdom and wit! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 3/11/2016 6:57:00 AM Thank you so much for your support, dear Sandra!! :) :)

Chuck Flores Date: 3/11/2016 5:58:00 AM congrats! Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 3/11/2016 6:00:00 AM Thank you! :) :)

Anindya Mohan Tagore Date: 2/26/2016 11:57:00 AM Wonderful write Sneha. Hugs, Bobby Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 3/11/2016 3:17:00 AM Thank you!! :) :)

Jan Allison Date: 2/21/2016 1:48:00 PM Very well written Sneha - love the rhyme and theme - good luck in the contest you have done well with this challenging form:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 2/21/2016 1:58:00 PM Thanks a lot, dear Jan.. The form is quite interesting!! :D :D

Paul Callus Date: 2/21/2016 1:33:00 PM You have done very well with this taxing form, Sneha; even the choice of topic is a very good one. // paul Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 2/21/2016 1:57:00 PM Thank you so much for your encouragement.. This is a different and interesting form!! :D :D

Daniel Carter Date: 2/21/2016 12:29:00 PM Very thought provoking. We are futile creatures Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 2/21/2016 12:38:00 PM Thanks a lot!! :D :D

CayCay Jennings Date: 2/21/2016 10:01:00 AM Very good and I couldn't agree more. So glad you wrote this ... CayCay Login to Reply Sneha Rv Date: 2/21/2016 10:04:00 AM Thank you so much!! :D :D