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Human Folly

Forests are felled
There once dwelled life -
Now quelled by greed.

Pulp to paper -
The razor tears
Through curtained flesh

Let’s laud our wit -
Bark - on it.. We
have writ   ‘Save trees’!


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Than-Bauk (Non Staircased) 
Internal rhyme

Copyright © Sneha Rv | Year Posted 2016

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March 16, 2016 at 6:34 AM

Than-Bauk written in style..Congrats on your winner..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

March 15, 2016 at 5:43 PM

Sneha, Congrats on your win in "Marugu MO's contest." Wuv ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich

March 13, 2016 at 7:01 PM

very well done, Sneha. Congrats on your top win.

March 12, 2016 at 2:21 AM

Wow, Sneha. Very impressive than-bauk. Were I not informed, beforehand, that it was a particular form, I barely would have noticed the rhymes .... very natural sounding. Cool subject matter .... I always found it also ironic how Dr. Seus' The Lorax (an environmentalist book) has cut down trees to spread its message! A much deserved top spot in the contest!

March 11, 2016 at 10:51 AM

Great write Sneha, very clever.

Carrie Richards

March 11, 2016 at 9:40 AM

Congratulations on a well thought subject! And a great win !

March 11, 2016 at 8:52 AM

I am most impressed with your poem. A well-deserved 1st place win ... CayCay

March 11, 2016 at 8:31 AM

Sneha Many congratulations on this fantastic WIN....

March 11, 2016 at 8:16 AM

wonderful message and a fabulous win Sneha:-) hugs Jan xx

Vladislav Raven

March 11, 2016 at 7:29 AM

Hi Sneha, Congratulations on your first place win in the contest. I liked the message and the wit within, excellent work....Vlad. A 7 for this write.

March 11, 2016 at 7:40 AM

Thanks a lot!! Glad you liked it!! :) :)

March 11, 2016 at 6:52 AM

Sneha, my heartfelt congratulations to you for your First Place win! Fine words and imagery of wisdom and wit! Hugs, Sandra

March 11, 2016 at 6:57 AM

Thank you so much for your support, dear Sandra!! :) :)

March 11, 2016 at 5:58 AM

congrats!

March 11, 2016 at 6:00 AM

Thank you! :) :)

Anindya Mohan Tagore

February 26, 2016 at 11:57 AM

Wonderful write Sneha. Hugs, Bobby

March 11, 2016 at 3:17 AM

Thank you!! :) :)

February 21, 2016 at 1:48 PM

Very well written Sneha - love the rhyme and theme - good luck in the contest you have done well with this challenging form:-) hugs jan xx

February 21, 2016 at 1:58 PM

Thanks a lot, dear Jan.. The form is quite interesting!! :D :D

February 21, 2016 at 1:33 PM

You have done very well with this taxing form, Sneha; even the choice of topic is a very good one. // paul

February 21, 2016 at 1:57 PM

Thank you so much for your encouragement.. This is a different and interesting form!! :D :D

February 21, 2016 at 12:29 PM

Very thought provoking. We are futile creatures

February 21, 2016 at 12:38 PM

Thanks a lot!! :D :D

February 21, 2016 at 10:01 AM

Very good and I couldn't agree more. So glad you wrote this ... CayCay

February 21, 2016 at 10:04 AM

Thank you so much!! :D :D

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