Sotto Poet Poet Etheree

Notes About The Poem

Human Brevity

Is mistaken misconception moiling?
firmly a bleak thought is genuine?
Instead, an upswing of pluck? not
conceding trepidation
to grasp your rubber rope
hurling you firmly
from the ending
instant of
perfect
fact

the
leeway
you persuade
you aren't as far
away as you think
you are unheeding to 
anticipated looming
ruin, rife with rueful worries
towering peaks and stunning landscape.
breathe deeply and whisper. in god we trust

Written: January 28, 2022

A Strand (1061) Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Valsa George February 1, 2022 at 5:51 PM Our life is short. Unfortunately we ruin it with rueful worries and we never see the towering peaks and stunning landscape. Look around, take deep breath, enjoy life and trust in God ! A great poem structured in attractive pattern.... ! All the best in the contest dear friend !

Jennifer Proxenos February 1, 2022 at 9:30 AM We are but a traveller passing through a given time. A very thought provoking poem Lasaad best wishes in the contest. Hugs blessings Jennifer

Demetrios Trifiatis January 29, 2022 at 5:58 AM Impressive Etheree and phantasmagoria of colors, my friend, Lasaad! Excellent writing.

Victor Buhagiar January 29, 2022 at 1:24 AM Well composed etheree.

Tom Cunningham January 28, 2022 at 12:57 PM When you think about it our time here is short and we have to live for every second you have. Good luck in the contest Lasaad. Tom