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Is mistaken misconception moiling? firmly a bleak thought is genuine? Instead, an upswing of pluck? not conceding trepidation to grasp your rubber rope hurling you firmly from the ending instant of perfect fact the leeway you persuade you aren't as far away as you think you are unheeding to anticipated looming ruin, rife with rueful worries towering peaks and stunning landscape. breathe deeply and whisper. in god we trust
Written: January 28, 2022 A Strand (1061) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 2/1/2022 5:51:00 PM
Our life is short. Unfortunately we ruin it with rueful worries and we never see the towering peaks and stunning landscape. Look around, take deep breath, enjoy life and trust in God ! A great poem structured in attractive pattern.... ! All the best in the contest dear friend !
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Date: 2/1/2022 9:30:00 AM
We are but a traveller passing through a given time. A very thought provoking poem Lasaad best wishes in the contest. Hugs blessings Jennifer
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Date: 1/29/2022 5:58:00 AM
Impressive Etheree and phantasmagoria of colors, my friend, Lasaad! Excellent writing.
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Date: 1/29/2022 1:24:00 AM
Well composed etheree.
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Date: 1/28/2022 12:57:00 PM
When you think about it our time here is short and we have to live for every second you have. Good luck in the contest Lasaad. Tom
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