Human Beings Being Human

It would be great if human beings
Were great at being human
And if all of mankind
Were made up of kind men
It would be wonderful if common knowledge
Was knowledge commonly known
And if the light from being enlightened
Into every heart was shown

It would be fantastic if the war to end all wars
Was the last war that we fought
It would be amazing if we learned the lessons
From every lesson we were taught
It would be cool if our freedom
To us was freely granted
And if every seed of kindness
Would grow wherever planted

It would be glorious if neighbors were neighborly
And prejudice a forgotten word
It would be awesome if we shared everything
And being greedy was absurd
It would be spectacular if the golden rule
Was golden to every man
And the good things that we ever did
Was everything that we can
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 12:13 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in the Being contest Joe. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 11:30 AM
Just Amazing Joe!!A fav!Congrats on your win.
Richards Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 9:00 AM
AMEN!! A terrific poem, a terrific message! Congratulations to you Joe!
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November 11, 2011 at 1:17 AM
CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN..P.D.
Johnson Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 9:07 PM
Great entry for the contest and congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 8:28 PM
Congrats Joe on a spectacular first place win for this amazing piece.. all too true your lines read luv.. enjoy..
Lane Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 7:29 PM
You may be on to something. Tony
Jones Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 6:14 PM
yeah, so, guess it's what we're here to learn for, eh? My theory is once we get it we get to go live somewhere else. Muchas thanks for the write, Joe, is beauty to me, namaste!N
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November 2, 2011 at 5:49 PM
Wouldn't it though? This was a marvelous piece! Thanks for posting!! :D Always, Laura
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