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Hullabaloo about sin To our soul's chagrin, Adam and Eve's sin, as man's fall from grace, shrouds us in disgrace. Biblical concept, translation inept, causes us to wilt and shrivel in guilt. Oh dear hearts, know this, soul's love, light and bliss. We're free like a bird, forged from God's first Word. Eristics dispute, pastors substitute, what's meant to be said ~ let's be by love led. All that's happened is, we've made life a quiz, head and heart discord, distanced from The Lord. Fine! We lost our way, desires made us sway but in time we learnt and ego chaff burnt. There's no need to fear, for God is so near, in-dwelling our form, felt as a bliss swarm. We forgive our child, tempestuous, wild, so God does likewise, for He's far more wise. We're asked to align with love throbs divine. Let's do so in play, through each night and day. Forget about sin. Go in now, go in and reclaim the light, shining within bright! 07-June-2022

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Date: 6/7/2022 3:05:00 AM
I really cannot get my head around the concept of original sin seeker, just doesn’t fit into any rationale for me anyway, what purpose would it serve any omnipotent God, another wonderful poem challenging dogmatic beliefs, cheers David
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Date: 6/7/2022 3:18:00 AM
A contest was started on this theme and I immediately penned this poem ~ the words just flowed! Then I saw that the contest was withdrawn! I’m not really challenging any beliefs but perhaps the scriptures have been distorted. I can’t imagine a God who we should fear or an imagined sin we should be guilty about. If someone’s lost, just give him a roadmap!
Date: 6/7/2022 12:52:00 AM
God will forgive all our sins if we repent. Thanks for reading my poem.
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Date: 6/7/2022 1:13:00 AM
We need to define repentance, Victor, being what save simply aligning with love?

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