Hugs of Fondness

a languid tour of vintage cafes marks
the deep scent of robusta coffee and omelet...
hand in hand,  an old couple recalls a first rendezvous
near this  boulevard  fifty years back 
where dewy ferns and  candles enliven drizzles, 
so silky in a glint of bus lights reflecting 
the same tranquility of this waning night... 

and yet, the crystal mist floats on  mantle
of air clutching lightly varnished gloves, 
petal-shaped--embracing not the showers of life
on snapshots rendering brushes of kisses ... 
but of fingers hugging fondness so kind, so kind
in the near  twilight’s walk  when remains
of age, of worn-out gloves ..take a fateful chance.


A Craigh Cornish Contest: Hugs
6/10/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 1:22 AM
This is so beautifully composed Nette. Congratulations on such a splendid win :) God bless you
Agustin Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 1:39 AM
Wow! Congrats! This made me nostalgic of my Dad and Mom's love story. God bless you.
Callus Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 10:44 AM
Beautiful, romantic, and affectionate, Nette. Congratulations on placing first!! Hugs // paul
Chutani Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 10:01 AM
Nette, very very tender for the oldie couple but young at heart. Congrats. Hugs. Mohan
Cunningham Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 10:36 AM
This is full of deep meaning and a touch of your romantic pen Nette. Your pen hasn't lost its sharp edge. Tom
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