Hug of Words - Feat Michael J Falotico

Hug of  Words
(11/09/2011)

By: Dinda Minardi and Michael J. Falotico

(Michael)
Two sets of eyes that never met.
A hug across lands where words connect.
We whisper and dream in poems so clear.
So far away but can still wipe a tear.
A friendship with no sounds, but a treasure I did found.
 
(Dinda)
Thousands of landscapes and lining mountains,
Cannot separate our mingled words that fountained
Dear precious, our bond is stronger than before is certain
Wishing spells and crafted words in rainbow tint
We fulfill each other, as dry season completed by season of rain


By: Michael J. Falotico and Dinda Minardi
For Tracie Edwards
Contest Name	'Grab a mate and collaborate

*9th place in the contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/10/2011 4:33:00 PM
Sweet love told by two talented souls. You two are a great duo. Hope to see some more.
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Date: 10/28/2011 12:08:00 PM
Sounds likke your minds work in sync to create beauty. So lovely Dinda!!! :)
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Date: 9/29/2011 12:02:00 PM
wow thank you, beautiful
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Date: 9/24/2011 3:04:00 AM
OOOOO!! A nice win,,, and Michael, is a great poet to collaborate with... Congrats on your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 9/21/2011 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your co-write win in Tracie's "Grab A Mate" contest Dinda. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/15/2011 8:08:00 PM
Congrats Dinda on a wonderful win with this collaboration with Michael.. an awesome and amazing piece ...luv..
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Date: 9/15/2011 4:08:00 AM
this is really good.... I'm very impressed
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Date: 9/14/2011 10:50:00 AM
this is so pretty. i saw it on michael's yesterday and left a comment. i keep forgetting to leave the same comment on the other person's page! how r u?
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Dinda Minardi
Date: 9/14/2011 11:16:00 AM
Oh, Susan...it's no big deal, honey. I'm good. I hope you well too... I enjoyed your poems tonight... I'll come back to check the other soon, Susan. :)
Date: 9/13/2011 8:57:00 PM
YOu did marvelous for this contest, Dinda. What a nice collaboration with the romantic poet Michael. I bet this does well in the contest! Luv, andrea
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Date: 9/13/2011 10:21:00 AM
Enjoyed this one..Poets' spirits can reach anywhere even over death's barrier..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Thanks for the kind review of my work...Sara
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Date: 9/12/2011 10:25:00 AM
I would like to take this time to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. I would also like to let you know I always enjoy reading your wonderful poetry Dinda. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2011 8:46:00 AM
A proud piece of Poetry that mirrors our friendship and connection of words that rhyme in every sense of the meaning. Hugs to you my dear Dinda. Luv Michael
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