Hug Does Thrill

Straight black shiny hair
Oh it's what make you fair
Gently, I'll hold don't flare

Entwining my arms around your waist
Oh time! I don't want to waste
Please don't ever ever detest
All I want is to feel and be rest

Your warmth relax breath 
Along the hallow of my throat
Undeniably making my heart throb
Adding trembles that abodes

Don't release a squirm, just feel
Long before a dream but now real
Sigh and lean, do not chill
Isn't it this hug a wonderful thrill?

By: olive_eloi
12:09pm
01/23/2014

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Hug - a gesture that comforts, soothes, encourages and cares....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Fraser Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 12:27 PM
Hugs are wonderful emotions, thrill. Whomever with, it can be even more special, James :)
Byte Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 2:49 PM
Ohh so true my friend it makes the person feel the care and concern for them. It takes away any burden also. Here is your hug from across the globemy ffriend . :-)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 9:45 AM
thanks MIchael.. :)
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