Hug Does Thrill

Straight black shiny hair Oh it's what make you fair Gently, I'll hold don't flare Entwining my arms around your waist Oh time! I don't want to waste Please don't ever ever detest All I want is to feel and be rest Your warmth relax breath Along the hallow of my throat Undeniably making my heart throb Adding trembles that abodes Don't release a squirm, just feel Long before a dream but now real Sigh and lean, do not chill Isn't it this hug a wonderful thrill? By: olive_eloi 12:09pm 01/23/2014 ------------------»»»» Hug - a gesture that comforts, soothes, encourages and cares....

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James Fraser

Date: 11/24/2014 12:27:00 PM

Hugs are wonderful emotions, thrill. Whomever with, it can be even more special, James :)

Michael Byte

Date: 1/27/2014 2:49:00 PM

Ohh so true my friend it makes the person feel the care and concern for them. It takes away any burden also. Here is your hug from across the globemy ffriend . :-)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/27/2014 9:45:00 AM

thanks MIchael.. :)