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Huddled In the Shadow

a destination challenges and setbacks to overcome waves of frustration Impulsive excitement exploration prohibition stupefaction molten iron sinks into one core pearl of love lurks in the seas assumptions & preconceived notions congestion and gestalt missing a treasure without meaning contrastingly diamonds are aesthetic & most precious but can't provide a warm embrace carrying a banyan tree on my back professional taste & art of love and respect or intimate memory huddled in shadows no more drowning in cares no more exhausted souls doubt and restlessness thirst for food and drink or a state of despair crying and sobbing learning persistence finding out the purpose grasp beauty and satisfaction perpetual pleasure of people animals places or object
Written: March 14, 2023 A Brian Strand Premiere No 1198 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Alex Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 12:15 AM
"learning persistence finding out the purpose" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Fowler Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 5:10 PM
Nice form Lasaad. Congratulations on your win! :)
Kauffman Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 10:24 AM
Wonderfully mastered word use Lasaad. Vivid, poignant, emotive! Love "diamonds are esthetic but can't provide a warm embrace." Congratulations on your win! Blessings my friend.
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