Hubby and Wife's Fantasy Filled Day

"Hubby’s fantasy football day, a wife’s date with fifty shades of grey."
Monoku Madness - Poetry Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton 17 Syllables Date Written: August 20, 2016
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May Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 9:04 PM
Congrats on your win Laura
Allison Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 3:52 PM
ha ha ha good lone Luloo:-) hugs Jan xx
Chansarkar Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 9:47 AM
Yes,both win and relish their time:)Congrats on your win Laura!
Callus Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 9:40 AM
Another creative and witty monoku, Laura:) ~ Congratulations on a truly worthy win. Regards // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 7:19 AM
Very good luloo! Congratulations on your high placement! 7 ; )
Medders Tobechi Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 10:57 PM
Thanks for the hubby, anyway. Congratulations
Hamilton Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 9:20 PM
Funny one thanks so much for your entry!
Roper Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 9:01 PM
I'm with , Andrea, with the door closed . Oh perfect monoku, Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 8:20 PM
in separate rooms. That is the american way Good one, Laura. Congrats.
Haight Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 7:56 PM
Laura, congratulations on your nice win in the Monoku contest! Great one! Hugs, Sandra
Kent Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 6:39 PM
Did you mean Grey Cup? Lol congrats on your Win.
Y. Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 5:13 PM
Hi Laura , I enjoyed this one- liner. I can't for "Fifty Shades Darker". I read all three of the books. Congratulations on your fine win: -) Alexis
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