How Wonderful You Are

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~How Wonderful You Are~ (Free Verse) How truly wonderful and awesome you are to all of us God You shower us with all your blessings and your glowing Grace As days and years of our life rushes by quicker than any flashing light I'm just looking forward till I get to see your divine and sweet face Everything around me just shows me that you truly live here with us You've written it and designed it all with your own Almighty Hands You are in my heart and my soul and always will be here close to me I can see You walking right beside me all the time in my mind's eyes How wonderful You are to us all my sweet and wonderful Lord and King The whole world sings You songs and praises of worship and glory You created us in your own image and made everything for us good and pure But man disobeyed and sinned and brought in evil and death in everything As God saw this happened and sin corrupting inside every single man immortal's soul He sent down His only Son Jesus to die for us upon the cross and make us whole. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 June.14.2015

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/16/2015 12:58:00 AM

Beautiful words of worship, Dorian! It's been awhile since I've read one of your inspiring poems. I'm happy I chose this one to read tonight. Hugs, Rhonda

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/22/2015 6:46:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Rhonda,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciate it.I'll visit you very soon.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:)D.

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/14/2015 9:25:00 AM

"D" -- I think I forgot to mark the "7" rating in my first comment, and so here it is in this one!! Best Wishes, "G"

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/22/2015 1:11:00 AM

Hi G! Thanks for the 7 + and all again my dear friend Gary.I'll visit you and comment on more of your beautiful poetry very soon.Best wishes to you too G! :) D.

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/14/2015 9:23:00 AM

Hello "D" -- An instant "7" + FAV here!! This could also probably pass as an "unrhymed sonnet." Beautifully rendered and wonderfully articulated. Very Well-Done!! Best Always, "G"

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/22/2015 12:23:00 AM

Hi G! Thank you ever so kindly Gary,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciate it all G, your visit and the 7 + too,my dear friend.Yes, you're so right about this poem it could pass as an unrhymed sonnet too:)I hope that all is well with you and Ingrid.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)D