How Will I Know

Here’s something to make Vivian think,
but I’m sure he knows the missing link.
I ask is he able to show
me, how will I ever know,
when I’ve run out of invisible ink.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 5:49 PM
Hello Laurie, a good one. have a nice evening my friend.
Laurie Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 8:52 PM
Hello Darlene … now the weather is warming up, I feel more alive. You too have a nice evening Darlene - Lindsay
Makama Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 10:58 AM
Lord God! This has excited me to my soul... My spirit dances like a redeemed bastard with your lines... Keep on writing dear friend.
Laurie Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 3:51 PM
Hello Funom … I trust you will have a nice festive season. Thank you for commenting. I'll keep writing and please keep your spirit dancing - Lindsay
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 6:35 PM
Cute one, lindsay and thanks for your visit to my poetry.
Laurie Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 5:29 PM
Hello Andrea … thanks Andrea. I do enjoy your thoughts in words - catch you soon - Lindsay
Devonshire Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 1:57 PM
:) You won't know and that's the point. Very clever limerick, Laurie. Enjoyed. I see you have another one. Will take a look.
Laurie Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 5:28 PM
G'day Carolyn … come to think of it - I can't be sure if I've read anything in invisible ink - thanks for reading Carolyn - Lindsay
Faulkner Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 5:18 PM
Good question! {I never knew I snored or talked in my sleep until my hubby told me!}
Laurie Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 5:25 PM
Hello Michelle … snoring is okay, but what are you admitting to when you talk? Maybe you've told hubby what you're getting him for Christmas - thanks Michelle - Lindsay
Leffanta Avatar
December 3, 2018 at 7:06 PM
Well done! Aloha! Rico
Laurie Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 5:22 PM
G'day Rico … thanks - sorry, I picked up the invisible ink pen again - catch you soon Rico - Lindsay
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