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How To Write a Love Poem

A love poem
                How do you write a love poem

                                                              First of all:
                                            You need inspiration
                                             The best inspiration
                                                             Is a person
                                                                     to love
                       Or to hate even
                       Yes, even hate or jealousy
                       can be an awesome prompt
                       to write about 
                       whatever
                       you once felt

                     Or perhaps puppy love
               for that little boy with braces
                 two blocks down the road
                      from where you lived

                Or even secret love for that
                   stud that never saw you
                because you're that wussie
                     that nerd that stutters

                           So how DOES one write a love poem?
                           Never EVER use the word 'love'
                           it's a cliche
                           all critics in the world agree 
                           on that one
                                                                    also never use: 
                                                     "kissing your moist lips"
                                                           'kissing' is a gerund
                                                                   'your moist lips' 
                                              is a cliche worse than 'love'

                               Then how to write a love poem?
                                          How would I know?
                                I've never written a decent one!

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August 5, 2017 
Copyright © Darren White
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Daniel Avatar
August 15, 2017 at 9:12 AM
Ha ha, Darren, I thoroughly enjoyed this one, maybe it would be best to get help from Chris Green;) I miss his lovely poems...
White Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 5:28 AM
hahaha, yeah, I'll ask him for help Jo, this is a funny comment, thank you :)
Garcia Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 10:57 PM
You forgot the part about falling in love with a 19 year old after your 50 year old wife throws you in jail. It's a phenomenal poem, DW. Well done
White Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 10:35 AM
I pfft as much as I want, and I'm not a 'sonny', I'm the sheriff here.
Garcia Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 7:49 AM
Don't you ever pfft me again, sonny.
White Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 5:26 AM
Pfft, I'm not talking to you anymore, you did a disappearing act on me ;) I mailed you, hope you're ok :)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 10:18 AM
A budding love plea written w/panache and such self-effacing modesty, Darren. Well there's my two cents of college educated worth's of comments. Lol! Really, it was an endearing poem ... and it has spurred me to wanna write a love poem w/the word love and the phrase, kissing of the lips sans moist in it. Love and peace always.
Barden Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 4:53 PM
You've written MANY, including this - love it! But I love gerund and cliche', too ... I'm odd like that. ;-)
White Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 12:38 AM
ssshhhh, don't tell anyone.... in this sentence it isn't a gerund (I didn't know either, someone told me) hahaha
Manassian Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 12:28 PM
OH dear...that's honestly for you. My latest poem happens to be on this very theme, my dear. I Love You...is so cliche. How does one say it in new ways. Let me know when you find out. Hugs
White Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 1:44 AM
Thanks Eileen. I'll let you know :)
Smith Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 9:45 AM
Haha...do you have an online course I can take?
White Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 11:08 AM
I can teach you ;)
Allison Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 8:13 AM
I LOVE it Darren - I struggle writing romantic poems and will take heed of your advice - note to self remove kissing and love from poem posted today lol:-) hugs jan xx
White Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 11:08 AM
I'll check if you succeeded :)
Pandit Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 7:22 AM
Lot of subject matter on love, good advice! Love the ending.
White Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 11:08 AM
Thank tou Vijay :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 6:44 AM
You are my favourite poet. :D
White Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 11:09 AM
Thanks ma mo :D
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