How To Live Long

Responding to hunger at once,
Time to time intaking causing imbalance,
Some food at home,
Enough aqua to consume,
Air to flow space in stomach,
The way to live long much!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Hollywood-Cutts Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 12:40 PM
good advice and sadly some will never realize it. Love your writing.
Thajudeen Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 1:28 AM
Thank you dear poet Bonnie.
Muravez Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 11:12 AM
Love it, the key to living is simply responding to positive needs.
Thajudeen Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 1:29 AM
Thank you dear poet Renee.
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