How the Wood Storks Broke My Heart

Afternoon, late March, delivering promise 
of respite from errands, long lines at the post office, 
queues of cars at red lights, what, if anything, is in
the offing for supper.  A glass of wine is nice, will soften
the mind's noisy dissertation, news of unrest in 
distant lands, world hunger, and men on South Africa's
Wild Coast who believe raping small girls will cure 
their AIDS.  For respite, I turn to the wood storks 
and two world-class pines, sending perfect drifts of straw 
and symmetrical cones into the protective lake-growth 
ornamenting edges with a scrim of airy viridian: birth-
right of sea birds needing evening asylum.  Now, 
there's an unwanted invasion of enormous jaws, taking
no prisoners on a battlefield of buzz saws. Machetes 
fell pines, artless shrubs and perfect palmettos that greedy 
landscapers treasure to decorate the yard-scapes of 
costly homes.  Development, New Construction?  Words-- 
glamorizing rape of wetlands. The birds are flying out, 
now, from across our lake, where once in heart-
stopping numbers, they bivouacked against the arrival 
of night. This day, this hour, they take wing, bird 
by bird in a ghostly exodus, taking their "Reflection 
of nearly all light from all visible wave links," whiter 
than masses of lilies on an Easter morning.  O, 
lost blessing, these birds, taking healing 
and our hearts in their exodus.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 4/2/2009 11:47:00 AM
Being a bird lover, I agree the exodus of marshland wildlife is alarming and terrible. since when do buildings take the place of life. About your emails. I'm not sure.... My address is.....davidraustin@charter.net..... How recent are they? Love, daver p.s. am sending you a poem you might relate to.
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Date: 3/30/2009 12:57:00 AM
Yes, yes, yes, Nola, this is an awesome poem and a critical subject well treated. I love it. Love
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Date: 3/29/2009 8:34:00 AM
What an awesome poem, covering so many important issues. I'm certainly with you on preserving the wetlands, Nola. Once we lose them, they will never come back and the birds will "leave, taking healing and our hearts in their exodus. Your thoughts here are very inspiring!
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