How the Pie Stole Christmas

Sitting next to the fireplace with hot coco in my hands
A comfy ugly sweater on with a blanket wrapped over my legs
Watching a beautiful movie with family and friends around
The Christmas tree full of bright lights and delicious candy canes
Snowflakes decorate the windows as the snow falls outside
All is perfect is my house filled with nothing but love
Food and pie getting prepared on the table for us to eat 
When it's ready we all jump up for joy and rush to our seats
Eat and eat and eat some more then grab a slice of mom's pie
Our mouth's water and the smell get every one's attention 
We take a bite and then inhale the whole pie until we get full
The pie makes every one be in a mom's pie coma 
Which knocks us out before we can even open our gifts 
The pie stole Christmas another year around

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 1/2/2019 7:48:00 AM
Congrats!! On this wonderful verse... Write on!! James
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Date: 12/20/2018 12:41:00 AM
This brought a smile to my face, very nice. "Mom's pie coma" that's just incredible.
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Date: 12/17/2018 12:35:00 PM
Karamel, congratulations on your win! Lol... "mom's pie coma which knocks us out..." I love that line :) ~Mark
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Date: 12/16/2018 9:45:00 PM
Well done, Karsmel. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/16/2018 4:28:00 PM
Beautiful deception of spending the holiday with your family, pie puts me in a coma too sometimes, congratulations on your win!
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