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How Sweet the Bloom of Love

Enchanted was I with a cloying scent... whiffs of wild magnolia mingled with the woodsy tang of her lemon verbena perfuming the air Like Samson's strength, the sun's threads of gold were clipped by silver shears of an ascending pearlescent moon How sweet the bloom of love ~ We slowly walked around the lake By the zenith of eventide we were serenaded by a cicada symphony in rhythmic allegro thrum... In the distance... howling of a feral creature crying with need of a mate How wild the passion of love ~ She tensed at his wailing call soothed with murmurs and kisses Her heart beat in sync with my own... tympani drums keeping time like the pendulum of a metronome How musical the lyrics of love ~ Her eyes met mine... mirroring myriads of sparkling stars gleaming as bright as a prismed diamond I would pledge my troth tonight... Here, beneath a celestial bower How heavenly the gift of love ~ A tendril of long wavy hair blew across her cheek I crimped it around my finger then released a raven curl My lips whispered softly... I bent to her like a willow to the shore How eager the need of love ~ When I knelt she trembled at my intent... Bodies clinging, we swam fathoms deep surrendering to each other as eternal lovers passionately torrid... reverently tender How plumb the depth of love ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ March 23, 2021 Eight Word Bardenesque Challenge Sponsored by John Hamilton

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Date: 4/19/2021 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a very creative story/write. Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/19/2021 3:33:00 PM
Thanks so much, Paula.
Date: 4/19/2021 12:46:00 AM
Exceptionally astounding, Jenna, you nailed it:) congratulations on your top win:) this goes into my faves:)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/19/2021 4:18:00 AM
Your gracious comments are appreciated. Thank you, Jo.
Date: 4/19/2021 12:26:00 AM
Heya Jenna congratulations on this wonderful piece, and utterly deserving winner, absolutely effortlessly you wind your poem around a disparate arrangement of random words, into a cogent compelling write, blowing all the competition away, cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/19/2021 4:17:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your sweet thoughts, David.
Date: 4/18/2021 7:14:00 PM
Beautiful write. Congrats on your top win. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/19/2021 4:17:00 AM
Thank you, Gina.
Date: 4/18/2021 5:27:00 PM
exceptional poetry Jenna, many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/19/2021 4:16:00 AM
Thank you, Jan.
Date: 4/18/2021 4:25:00 PM
This is amazing Jenna, congrats on a stand alone first place, this is totally Bardenesque enough...I truly could see Greg writing this...simply wow!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/19/2021 4:16:00 AM
I am very pleased by your gracious comments and the placement in your contest. Thank you, John.
Date: 3/24/2021 11:38:00 AM
Dearest Jenna, this is romantic artistry at its zenith under the creative influence of your gifted pen and your passionate heart's imagination. Every verse is exquisite with emotion and imagery and the required words are sublimely interwoven into the golden threads of this masterpiece. John will love this, I'm sure. I love the lightly seasoned repetitive verse that adds a special spice to each stanza. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, dear poetess and dear friend.. ~Susan
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/24/2021 12:36:00 PM
I am so pleased by your kind remarks, Susan. I don't know if it's 'Bardenesque' enough, but your compliments are prize enough. Thank you so sincerely.
Date: 3/23/2021 12:55:00 PM
WOW!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/23/2021 2:00:00 PM
That one word speaks loudly to me, Jan. Thanks.
Date: 3/23/2021 12:50:00 PM
You wove those eight words so well into your verse Jenna, creating a very romantic piece. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/23/2021 1:58:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your many visits and kind sentiments, Tom.

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