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How Sweet It Is

Gumdrops and lollipops Cotton candy and cakes Creamy pudding and pies Double malts and milk shakes Taffy and licorice And every ice cream too Chocolate and caramel Are half as sweet as you

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Jerry Brotherton

Date: 10/9/2023 8:16:00 PM

A delicious poem my friend.

Randy Freie
Date: 10/10/2023 1:02:00 AM

Thanks Jerry, unfortunately I put on 10 lbs. just writing it. I think I got a new cavity too.

Karen Jones

Date: 10/9/2023 6:51:00 AM

Aw this is melodic and loving. Great job.

Randy Freie
Date: 10/9/2023 2:22:00 PM

Thanks Karen, I appreciate your comments. Although, I have to be careful with poems like this one. I put on 10 lbs. just writing it.