Randy Freie Poet Rhyme

How Sweet It Is

Gumdrops and lollipops

Cotton candy and cakes

Creamy pudding and pies

Double malts and milk shakes

Taffy and licorice

And every ice cream too

Chocolate and caramel

Are half as sweet as you

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Jerry Brotherton October 9, 2023 at 8:16 PM A delicious poem my friend. Randy Freie October 10, 2023 at 1:02 AM Thanks Jerry, unfortunately I put on 10 lbs. just writing it. I think I got a new cavity too.

Karen Jones October 9, 2023 at 6:51 AM Aw this is melodic and loving. Great job. Randy Freie October 9, 2023 at 2:22 PM Thanks Karen, I appreciate your comments. Although, I have to be careful with poems like this one. I put on 10 lbs. just writing it.