How My First Poem was Born

nicknames for three kids
Perky Pink, Road Runner and
Sailor Girl. in blink
of eye, gone and forgotten
will they even remember

how first i saw them
in hawaiian paradise
personalities
between Pearl Harbor sailing
and home life with pen in hand

a real pen not much
time to let ink imagine
with work and salutes
pretty and cute and active
might kids care to find

the scrawls of my heart
and penmanship less shaky
would the nuns be proud
in true days of motherhood
hug poems for my trio
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Dietrich Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 12:36 PM
Such an interesting inspiration to write. Congrats here, Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:37 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Hind Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 3:21 PM
This is so true to your self and interesting, enjoyed reading it :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 7:41 PM
Glad you found it interesting! Had fun reminiscing! xx
Tor Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 3:07 PM
Our children are our life and they inspire us to be creative and thoughtful and I think they surely inspired you to write Kim. You have to thank them for doing so. God bless them you and I wish you a warm and joyful Christmas to you and all your babies...
Rodrigues Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 7:43 PM
Merry Christmas to you and yours Mike! Thank you!
George Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 12:08 AM
So you are the proud mother of three kids.... two boys and a girl, I suppose. They are your inspiration. Hope they read your poems and enjoy.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 5:30 AM
Thank you, Valsa! xx
Sheehan Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 11:49 AM
Wonderful piece. Nice take on the creative process. Conveys emotions.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 3:29 PM
Thank you so much, Frank!
Alhemaidy Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 10:37 AM
Lovely mother & kids!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 10:46 AM
Thank you, Abdullah!
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 8:08 AM
- A lovely birth for your first poem, Kim :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 9:47 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)
Cunningham Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 8:02 AM
It's amazes me how we can all remember the spark that set us off on our poetic journeys. Nothing better than your kids to inspire you Good luck in the contest Kim. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 9:47 AM
Thank you kindly, Tom!
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