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How My First Poem Was Born


childhood’s dream remains
flashing its grandiose image
with me and Jesus
riding on His green bike was
my first mount of crafted words
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Gasun Avatar
December 22, 2024 at 5:15 PM
How my first poem was born Contest Judged: 12/12/2024 1:51:00 PM Sponsored by: Jcb Brul Place 1: (among the fist place w)
Dietrich Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 12:31 PM
Back with congrats. Soupmail too
Alex Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 8:12 PM
"me and Jesus riding on His green bike" - indeed, a grand spiritual beginning. Congratulations!
Roper Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 11:30 PM
I love the feeling in this poem, Len. Well done. Soup mail.
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 9:08 PM
This is so precious. I am loving these tanka contests
Allison Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 3:17 PM
what a lovely poem Len and its fabulous how this lit the spark for your poetry:-) I didnt start writing until 2013 when my husband was actually in cancer surgery:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 10:41 AM
- Lovely ...your first poem, Len :) - hugs
Gasun Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 7:24 AM
Thank you so much for reading and your encouraging comments my dear poet friend, Anne-lise! Hugs
One Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 9:41 AM
Interesting take on this contest... I see the bible and Jesus were very influential in your journey with poetry.. My first poem was about a friend.. All the best for the contest..
Gasun Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 10:09 AM
Thank you so much again for reading my poem my dear poet freind SO. Yes, dear poet friend SO. As far as I remember, that's the first inspiration in my poetry birth. Sorry, so hard to compose a lil bit now, I just came from another mourning of a loved ones/ relatives: March, April (2 loss), Nov. then Dec.
Cunningham Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 9:19 AM
The spark that was the start of your poetic journey, it's something we all remember. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Gasun Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 9:32 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your inspiring words my dear poet friend Tom. Thanks also for the best wishes. Good luck luck to you as well. Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 8:11 AM
Your "How My First Poem Was Born" write is wonderful. Hope you are OK...  "Good Luck" Hugs... Blessings..............
Gasun Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 9:28 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem my dear poet friend Paula. I'm ok now and thanks God for strength and comfort. We lost a loved one again recently, the one who is so close to my heart, a relative who is so loving and kind and one of my inspirations in poetry. He is my poet uncle. He is now in heaven:((
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