Nette Onclaud Poet Blank verse

How Murmurs Tease

Your gentle voice chimes
 in my ears
Where murmurs tease
 on fields  of green;
And lilies swirl with tuneful breeze
Just like my dance, 
how wildly free
That moonlight peeps 
beneath an oak ,
Its beam a  glint
 from our romantic word-plays:



For Edward McCall's Contest
Sweet Banter; you tease me so nicely
2/8/2018

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Normie Payton February 14, 2018 at 4:22 PM This was sweet, Nette. Keep it up :)

Eve Roper February 12, 2018 at 9:44 PM Congratulations on your win, Nette! Hugs Eve ~`*

Arthur Vaso February 11, 2018 at 11:57 PM Such beautiful poetry, a pleasure to read!!

Line Gauthier February 11, 2018 at 7:21 PM Very pleasant red, nette. Honorable congrats!

Edward Mccall February 11, 2018 at 4:40 PM Hi nette, what a delightful poem the opening line set the tone for the entire piece well done and congrats on your placement. Edward.

Heidi Sands February 8, 2018 at 10:31 AM Perfectly written Nette. Good luck in the contest :)

Vijay Pandit February 8, 2018 at 6:40 AM I enjoyed reading your poem, nette. A delicate depiction of love..best for a win.

Silent One February 8, 2018 at 6:04 AM What an excellent entry for this contest, probably the best I have read..

Anne-Lise Andresen February 8, 2018 at 4:10 AM - Wonderful poem Nette ... love the last two lines ... they say it all :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)