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How Murmurs Tease

Your gentle voice chimes in my ears Where murmurs tease on fields of green; And lilies swirl with tuneful breeze Just like my dance, how wildly free That moonlight peeps beneath an oak , Its beam a glint from our romantic word-plays: For Edward McCall's Contest Sweet Banter; you tease me so nicely 2/8/2018

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Date: 2/14/2018 4:22:00 PM
This was sweet, Nette. Keep it up :)
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Date: 2/12/2018 9:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nette! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/11/2018 11:57:00 PM
Such beautiful poetry, a pleasure to read!!
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Date: 2/11/2018 7:21:00 PM
Very pleasant red, nette. Honorable congrats!
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Date: 2/11/2018 4:40:00 PM
Hi nette, what a delightful poem the opening line set the tone for the entire piece well done and congrats on your placement. Edward.
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Date: 2/8/2018 10:31:00 AM
Perfectly written Nette. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 2/8/2018 6:40:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem, nette. A delicate depiction of love..best for a win.
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Date: 2/8/2018 6:04:00 AM
What an excellent entry for this contest, probably the best I have read..
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Date: 2/8/2018 4:10:00 AM
- Wonderful poem Nette ... love the last two lines ... they say it all :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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