How Much Longer

How much longer...till my emotional scars finally heal?
   Because wishing on fallen stars no longer seem so real.

How much longer...till my dark sky parts and the sun breaks through?
   I look deep within my heart, but there's no more you.

How much longer...till love finds me and the butterflies return?
   I'm trying to put the pain behind me, although I still feel the burn.

How much longer...till I feel the sharp sting of cupids arrow?
   Maybe cupid has a broken bowstring, or the gateway to my heart is too narrow!

How much longer...till I'm emotionally free, and the blood begins to flow once more?
   I guess I'll continually bury myself in my poetry, hoping to unlock that door!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 1/28/2011 2:43:00 AM
God only knows this answer, reading this has made my heart feel so heavy with sadness, so kno the feeling :( it sux, esp when delt with this pain for so long, sometimes u get numb but it catches back up with u and u hrt even more, your soul screams nside,, i feel 4 u here, God b with u, sincerely Jen
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Date: 12/3/2010 4:09:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry today. I enjoyed reading it Jimmy. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/2/2010 4:33:00 PM
a wonderful and beautiful write this was, very refreshing. love happens as it will my friend. no one commands it or tells it when it is right and to happen, it simply does. just keep hope in your heart and find the beauty around you. well penned my friend (hey i rhymed ;)). --Madison
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Date: 12/2/2010 2:27:00 PM
You'll be surprised, JAM! And you will remember this day I told you, "Be still". God will give you all that you deserve! All will be well for you! Just be patient, take your time, keep your heart open and true always! Love you, Audrey
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Date: 12/2/2010 12:20:00 PM
Wonderful words of emotion Jimmy .. your day will come .. God's timing is always right... hang in there luv.. Soup Mail..
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