How Many Heroes Now Have Gone Unsung

It’s said that only the good die young. So many souls with hearts of gold we’ve lost! How many heroes now have gone unsung? They’re taken with no mercy. At what cost? We cannot know the good they would have done. So many souls with hearts of gold we’ve lost! They lie in cold hard graves beneath our sun. If only they had been allowed to bloom. We cannot know the good they would have done. How swiftly do they sometimes meet their doom. And all their loved ones have to show is grief. If only they had been allowed to bloom! Each sprout not let to even grow one leaf! What utter waste! They had so much to give, and all their loved ones have to show is grief. Each sprout not let to even grow one leaf. It’s said that only the good die young. What utter waste; they had so much to give! How many heroes now have gone unsung? Written 5/27/2013
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Walker Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 9:25 AM
Powerful write.
Y. Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 9:42 PM
Andrea, this is a well written piece. Personally I don't understand war however you penned an excellent write in their memory.congrats on your well deserved win:)Alexis
Nunez Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 8:26 PM
The cruelty that war brings, no one knows the utter pain except the bereaved family. Absolute beauty here, Andie. Congrats!
Trichet Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 7:21 PM
Awesome Andrea, lovely dedication heroes past
May Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 3:19 PM
Great write and win Andrea.... Congrats
Jae Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 8:27 AM
This is amazing!!!! Congrats on the win and again but louder, THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!
Callus Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 8:20 AM
A fitting tribute to the unsung heroes who never got the chance to bloom. Congratulations on a very merited win, Andrea. // paul
A  Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 1:36 AM
Hi Andrea, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
A   Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 12:50 AM
Sweet win.... LINDA
Wigley Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 8:50 PM
Excellent, Andrea, well done. Viv x
Lamoureux Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 8:48 PM
I enjoyed your winning poem Andrea. Congratulations.
Allison Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 5:48 PM
Many congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 5:21 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve * @-)--< 7
Hamilton Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 12:24 PM
a poem that truly depicts the horrors of war Andrea congrats on placing hugs
Docherty Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 10:41 AM
Tugs at the heart strings with the sadness of this truth filled write. Touching indeed. Thanks for your comments on A mothers Treasures today... managed to get a few down today finally... sadly couldn't find yours on digging for gold though - send me a link and I'll read it...?
Babcock Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 9:57 PM
I think it is horrible that the young must die for the older , wiser and richer governments.They have to follow orders even if it means death. love phyl
Austin Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 9:32 AM
When I think about it it makes me furious that our youngest have to die for the greed of the elder. Love, daver
Maverick Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 2:55 PM
Hmm...Only the Lord has the power over life and death; I have seen many things come to pass that had been presented to me in secret, take for instance. ' that British icon ' sir James Saville; who did do a lot to raise funds for poorly children..but at the same time was a vile predator; maybe someone could have had a bad stroke at say 30yrs only God knows what is to transpire; A thought provoking write though Andrea congratulations on the win; best regards Joe..)
Eastman Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 8:18 AM
Very well done! And loved how you handled the topic. Your friend.
Seal Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 7:05 PM
Just reading this again and giving it another 7
Kendrick Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 5:37 PM
Congrats on your great winning work..Sara
Horsman Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 3:41 PM
Love this Andrea, should put in the WHY contest,,
Horne Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 3:39 PM
so glad to see this was a winner, Andrea
Harper Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 8:14 PM
Andrea, excellent homage to those who die young, good tone and sad mood. Congratulations on your win!
Oyewole Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 10:25 AM
Many congrats to you on your well deserved win. I'm glad to see it on the list. AO
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