How Many Drinks Make You Beautiful

How many drinks make you beautiful?
      that question was asked to me
 It’s somewhere around five
      at a neighborhood dive 
and the time is a quarter to three
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Shaw Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 5:10 PM
Ahhh you look good enough to me "Mike" - and thats without a drink - Mind its only quarter to five - give me more time to have a think . . . ; )
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August 28, 2017 at 8:52 PM
Thanks Indiana!
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August 26, 2017 at 11:15 AM
A good one, Mike! Janice
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 9:13 AM
ha ha ha I guess it depends if you have your beer goggles on at the time too Mike lol:-) hugs jan xx
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August 26, 2017 at 9:35 AM
I hope it works in reverse too, so that I look good to somebody after they've had a few.
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