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How Magical


How magical is lovely wintertime.
Myriads of flakes efface drab terrain,
creating an appearance that’s so sublime
I want to sleigh ride on a country lane.

Imagine riding on that one-horse sleigh
cuddling with your sweetheart right at your side -
a panoramic snow scene on display.
Just think of the pleasure this would provide.

Oh, to take delight in this winter scene,
inhaling quietude and feeling bliss -
the world encased in white with satin sheen.
Pristine and splendid – magical is this!

winterrhyme

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 2/13/2024 10:44:00 AM

Hello Andrea. Your scenery is very magical and beautiful too. Who could argue with that. No one. Never did you stray from the title. Amazing how each season has power imagery uniqueness and more. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. May this day find you well. I will return again soon. Blessings and Peace always. (smile)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/15/2024 6:19:00 AM

Andrea, you captured the magic of winter in your poem, congratulations on your winning placement!

Joseph May

Date: 1/14/2024 1:20:00 PM

Wonderful write on winter's magic Andrea, best wishes

Cory Long

Date: 1/13/2024 5:54:00 AM

Hey stanger how you been? Im back on ps.. look forward to chatting.. Love the message your poem is painting.. Cory

Charles Messina

Date: 1/13/2024 5:13:00 AM

Lovely write, Andrea. Now that's winter magic!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/13/2024 2:15:00 AM

Andrea, your poem is alluring. Hugs.

Yann Rolland

Date: 1/13/2024 12:37:00 AM

exquisite poem, snow is magical indeed, and calm the country sound woth perfect sounds, Thanks Andrea for the beautiful poem

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/12/2024 1:40:00 PM

I enjoyed your wonderful write/ending. Winter snow is magical... Have a blessed day writing away...............

Paige Hind

Date: 1/12/2024 1:28:00 PM

So much loveliness...an enchantment

Silent One

Date: 1/12/2024 10:56:00 AM

I am surprised you did not pick a certain rhyme form, with you expertise in such things.. However, this one flows so well and I am sure will do well in the contest..

Silent One
Date: 1/12/2024 1:18:00 PM

I meant like dizain, rispetto etc

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/12/2024 11:08:00 AM

I did abab etc. Was it not allowed

Jay Narain

Date: 1/12/2024 10:42:00 AM

Nice imagery on enchantment of winter. Well penned.

Christina Bowring

Date: 1/12/2024 9:17:00 AM

This is such a delight to read dear Andrea. Really lovely how you have captured the enchantment that winter can bring- especially if the one you love is by your side! Beautiful imagery that transports the reader there,’ myriads of flakes’ ‘ white with satin sheen’. You have artistically created a magical scene that’s heartwarming amidst the depths of winter. A treat to read. Thank you for sharing. Hugs and smiles :):)

Miranda Hawley

Date: 1/12/2024 5:00:00 AM

I agree with your message, so long as I am not driving in the snow.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/12/2024 11:09:00 AM

Yeah it is horrible to drive in

Valsa George

Date: 1/11/2024 7:58:00 PM

Simply beautiful is the winter scene you have painted, dear Andrea. I am sure this will be placed high !

Robert Schatz

Date: 1/11/2024 6:34:00 PM

Another beauty Andrea... "world encased in white with satin sheen"

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/11/2024 4:03:00 PM

You capture how remarkable a coating of snow is--like new clothes. Fun to watch it come and slowly melt away. A lot of fun playing it is, especially when we have some leisure time and don't need to be at work first thing in the AM!