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Sitting outside, On a cedar board swing. Cold beer right beside, Looking for the “ugly” in the spring. My mind wanders to and fro, Looking for a spooky story. Up top perched a crow, Looking down at something gory. Something starts to focus in me, As my mind paints a Monet. Light brush strokes I see, Flying across my cerebral page. Then my pen starts a flying, Gliding in a maddened way. So I make the crow start crying, And make him eat the gore away. Then my pen is between my teeth, And I reach for my thesaurus. To change an angry to a seethe, See? I want you to think my vocab ain’t so porous.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/24/2013 8:22:00 PM
Jacob, Congratulations in Carol's awesome "WHO WHAT WHERE" ~Goodnight~ Linda
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Date: 4/23/2013 9:46:00 PM
Congratulations... the crow eating the gore away had me... natures way....
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Date: 3/16/2013 7:01:00 PM
That's a good one. I liked the cerebral page and what it could entail.
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