How I Snagged Joe (And the Rest Is History)

Hot August, 1974, I was back for my second year at college,
having just settled into a new place at Anita Apartments,
right next to the guys’ apartment complex called Tanner’s.
My first night, we answered a knock at our door.
Steve Dietrich, a friend of my roommate, entered our apartment,
but my eyes went immediately to the younger man with him.
That would be his brother Joel, there for his first year at BYU.
My first thought was this: How shy he is, so reserved. . . but so adorable.
He was tall and thin and cute as the dickens.
They stayed for just a while, and by the time they left,
I’d formulated my big plan:
 to get to know this boy Joel (who everyone just called Joe).

There was to be a parking lot dance that weekend,
and so I waited expectantly, hoping all week 
 to catch a glimpse of this boy I’d found so attractive,
but no matter how often I strolled past his apartment,
my opportunity for a “chance encounter” never occurred.

The night of the dance arrived and I was right there,
all decked out in my colorful tight top with bellbottoms,
long luscious lashes curled and pink frost lipstick applied.
When I caught sight of Joel, he was slow dancing with some girl.
A blonde with glasses, she was rather plain and smaller than me.
I was not pleased to see her with Joe, and I thought to myself:
Hmmmm, who does she think she is? I saw him first, 
and he is NOT going to stay with her tonight.

As they danced, I fixed my eyes on him, 
my beautiful, long-lashed, sultry green eyes.
He looked up and saw me then. I must have taken him by surprise
because I did not lower my gaze. 
I wanted him to know that he was going to be mine,
so I willed him with my gaze to break away from that blonde
and come to me.
And so he did. .  the rest is history.

Beside me at this moment, lying on our bed, watching TV,
is the man who today bears little resemblance to that 
very young man I met 35 years ago.
I turn to him and ask, “Do you remember the VERY first time you saw me?”
He replies, “I don’t know; a parking lot dance?”
Well, at least he came close. . .

For Frank Herrera's Contest: Love Story
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Arnott Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 9:41 AM
very touching, makes u think whats comes or meant to b also made me laf alil :)
Fullick Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 12:22 AM
I love storys, O the words in my first reply, these were the first thought I had after reading narrative. All fresh and the fisrt time these words saw the light of day in this form were here on you comments page. I know thry are a bit out of sink and I guessed the months but they are just as they came to me after reading your nararative. Thank you.
Fullick Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 5:19 PM
Remember remember 74 in November We walked and we talked until we reached December.You made my heart fly now that was JulyAnd by August we’d wed it was sunny and dry.I look at you now as you watch sport on the TVAnd sometimes I wonder if you still see me. Then you do something special without even thinkingAnd I’m so glad I caught you it took lots of big blinking.I love how love feels its passion and feelingAs we both lay here hugging under the fan on the ceiling.Truly I loved this
La France Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 2:52 PM
Well, Andrea, most woman are much more romantic than men, we put so much more meaning into that first kiss, I think this poem is just wonderful and I wish you the best of luck in the contest ~~
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 2:05 PM
WOW what a story Andrea my memory isn't that good cause it's been 38 years for me.Go read my 38 yrs.Thanks for your very sweet comments.Teresa
Austin Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 7:39 AM
Yes, you are a Cougar through and through. The poor man stood not a chance at the parking lot dance. Love, Dave
Neels Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 7:16 AM
Andrea, you have just penned a favorite of mine ;) I love this!! Great love story and you made me go mushy lol, Good luck with this great write, love Wilma
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October 28, 2010 at 2:54 AM
love stories make me want to cry. it will be that way for a while. but i liked your story. did yo look in the right book. it should say either animals or live stock. go to the book stgarting with Zech. john
Bloomsfield Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 11:25 PM
That's the girl!you went for your Joel and made him yours,lovely!lovely!I love how you met your hubby,sweet,sweet and sweet. .it was a pleasure reading you,and dnt worry when you can't read me dear,i do understand those situations,when one want to write and read more but for various reasons can't and sometimes i read your blogs,but don't have time to comment on poetry and blogs all together,but your blogs are fun too!:)Celene.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 7:17 PM
What an awesome story Andrea.. truly honest and uniquely intense with some fun lines too.. luv the willing gaze.. I have tried that myself a time or two..how I got Ron..haha..us girls have our tricks..luv.. good luck in Frank''s contest.. he will luv this one as I do ..my friend... "Its All Good" is my entry ..
Kendrick Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 5:23 PM
Great work to have to compete against..Reads like a winner..I was delighted that you read and found my work worthy of your comments and thanks for letting me know that I won the contest..Sara
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October 27, 2010 at 4:15 PM
What a great love story. It is a treat to read this on my first night back to commenting. Thank you for sharing. I hope to be reading more of you in the next few months. Thank you for your continued support of my work, too. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Babcock Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 12:01 PM
So that is how it all happened and now he is still beside you. It is funny we have no friends who are divorced and lots of us are nearing 40 years of marriage. Good luck in the contest. Luv Phyl
Babcock Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 12:01 PM
So that is how it all happened and now he is still beside you. It is funny we have no friends who are divorced and lots of us are nearing 40 years of marriage. Good luck in the contest. Luv Phyl
K. Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 7:36 AM
I sure enjoyed how you and Joe met before "history" (huh am I making sense?) Wonderful way of bringing us to that first night you guys met then ending with the present--but yup I agree, at least he came close ;) hugs to you and enjoy your day with Joe (didn't know he was Joel-- I actually thought he was a Joseph!) hugs to you and I sure do hope this places high :) -- nikko :)
Mehta Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 6:52 AM
Very strong alluring power you showed to become Mrs. Dietrich, nice and real love story, Good luck, Andrea
Peranteau Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 1:57 AM
Very cute Andrea ! Very cute. Give the man a break girlie....are you still wearing bell bottoms ? *smiles* 35 years....God bless you both ! Hey...and you both still share the same bed....awesome ! much love, james
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