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How I Feel

The way i feel is weird I feel death coming very near I feel this dark feeling I think i stop breathing When I cry it rains blood But my pain feels like mud I feel sad But at the same time I feel mad I don't know what to do I feel like a foo i feel black I think i stared bleeding from my back I feel dead I just want to get blast in the head The way i really feel is emo And my emotions won't help it

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Date: 3/10/2016 2:01:00 AM
Sofia, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/7/2015 1:18:00 PM
SOFIA, this is a wonderful write. Enjoyed dropping by to read. Love SKAT
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Date: 1/6/2010 10:05:00 AM
we all feel down sometimes, but just pray and have faith in the Lord and he shall give you spiritual freedom which is above all beautiful!
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Date: 1/4/2010 3:08:00 PM
If we know the diagnosis then we can invent a therapy ... and there is none better than just writing until all the pain is gone ... after all this writing builds great bridges for you. Welcome to poetry soup, your sublime gift shakes the tree of love; I am honored to read to work as a friend.
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Date: 1/4/2010 9:16:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup .. and hope your stay is long and enjoyable.. do u really feel this dark about everything? .. hope your find some bright spots and positive vibes to help u through these feelings.. blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/4/2010 8:01:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sofia. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2010 1:47:00 AM
this is rather a sad one, i would surely pray you feel good and get better.
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