How I

how I ache for you
how I sweat and shake for you
how I love/hate you

Catie’s contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Oyewole Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 3:19 PM
Well done! I check out for your "Commercial" poem 1 but to no avail. Good luck in Catie's Contest. AO
Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 12:56 AM
it's so interesting to see the different interpretations for contests like this one. love and hate are very close sometimes!
Gildersleeve Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 3:30 PM
Powerful and effective Tim, Ne'er so well expressed. Warm Smiles, Connie
Manassian Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 2:36 PM
Good one, Tim! VERY expressive
Bauer Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 12:05 PM
you've nailed this one!
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