How Hot Were We
How hot were we
As icy night
was turning frigid,
The howling sounds
made me rigid,
Chilled the wine
and lit candles,
Passion in eyes
he held me tight.....
Palpitations,
the breaths burnt.....
Thumping hearts
spurred the fumes...
Ah the smoke detectors
activated,
Splashes of rain,
To check......
how hot we had been !
Written July 31st, 2015
For contest "How hot was it" by John
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