How High the Walls We Build

HOW HIGH THE WALLS WE BUILD

How high the walls we build;
Against marauding tribes and infidels,
Canon volleys and siege machines
Both literal and imagined we defend.
Symbols of strength and power;
Secure the bricks and mortar…
Look how high they tower!
This is Civilization!
Our best are used for prisons.

Mighty are the walls we make
That sonic forces cannot shake
And towers for vision, foresight.
How high the walls we build
To conquer and to divide.
How thick, how strong,
How high, how long…
But can a wall, however high,
Be tall enough, strong enough,
Secure enough to restrain
A single butterfly?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hamilton Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 8:16 PM
Great write Phil, so much to ponder with this write. Congrats on a fine win, well deserved!
Lawless Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 11:05 AM
Beware those who build walls to imprison the "butterflies of thought". Love the last line Phil.
Capitano Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 6:21 PM
Thanks, John, I enjoyed your Wall poem as well.
Flower Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 1:17 AM
Wow, this one is great. Congrats on your win, Phil. ;)
Richards Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 1:16 PM
Oh, that last line is stunning !! Well done !! Congratulations on a well deserved win!
Capitano Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 7:21 PM
Yes, thank you, it turned out well.
Haight Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 12:58 PM
So much wisdom expressed here, Phil. Congratulations on your well-deserved podium win. Sandra
Capitano Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 7:20 PM
I'm honoured.
Cheema Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 10:37 AM
Congrats Phil! The last two lines ring the note of the strongest wall, but not stong enough for a butterfly! Balveen
Capitano Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 12:35 PM
thank you Balveen, it took me 5 days to come up with that image with the help of a visit to my fave store (the Love Tree) and a butterfly in the window.
Rycroft Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 8:53 AM
Congrats well-done x
Capitano Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 12:36 PM
tanx :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 8:27 AM
Love how you ended your poem, after the build up! Congratulations, Phil!
Capitano Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 8:34 AM
Thank you Kim; its so nice to have your work appreciated, Namaste.
Lane Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 9:20 AM
What a lovely ending, Phil. Instead of building higher and stronger walls to keep the enemy out, we should be working at eliminating the reasons why there are walls between us. One day the world will exist in peace without walls of any kind. I really enjoy your writings.
Jennings Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 9:16 AM
What wonderful metaphorical poem you have mastered! Wow.... The walls could go on for ever and ever... Well, done...
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