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How Fragile Is the Heart


How fragile is the heart that loves;
   that stands out naked, unafraid,
      and takes a chance to share it all
with deep emotions spent, displayed.

How fragile is the heart that gives
   above, beyond what is required;
      but sometimes, that is not enough
for what's expected and desired.

How fragile is the heart that hurts
   when others take for granted deeds,
      and barely notice, since those fill
their simple, ordinary, needs.

How fragile is the heart that cries
   when empty with no love returned.
      How can this be...a heart that gives
still feels that love is so unearned.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 4/2/2020 9:04:00 AM
Such a beautifully written sentimental poem. It is moving and touching and very well written with great use of rhyme and word choices. An excellent example of how to write a quatrain. Enjoyed this thoughtful poem very much.
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Date: 1/25/2018 1:29:00 PM
This is a very beautiful poem, Sandra. I love it. Congrats on your wonderfully earned win.
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Date: 1/25/2018 10:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra-- this is a fine poem, and by fine I also mean its keen sense of how unfair, even tragic life-- and people-- can be. It does take great courage-- and a sense of the human soul- to love, truly love, which is perhaps why so many people find it hard to.
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Date: 10/25/2017 4:58:00 PM
Very touching and sweet, Sandra - loved it! - Best wishes and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend! :-)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/26/2017 4:21:00 PM
Gregory, once again, thank you very much for your congratulations and uplifting comments. Sandra
Date: 10/18/2017 4:06:00 PM
A beautiful poem Sandra, congrats :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/20/2017 7:58:00 AM
Thank you, Gary, for your supportive comment and congrats. Sandra
Date: 10/18/2017 3:08:00 PM
Wonderful writing Sandra, oh how I love your excellent rhymes and flow, just perfect. Congrats on a fine win!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/20/2017 7:58:00 AM
Thank you, John, for another fine contest. I enjoyed writing my poem for it, and I appreciate your nice comment and placement. Sandra
Date: 10/15/2017 7:39:00 PM
A beautifully written, intimate and emotional poem Sandra. Heartfelt and imploring lines of vulnerable sentiments. I enjoyed reading your poetry this evening. Good luck in the contest!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/18/2017 10:19:00 AM
Thank you, Susan, for your lovely, supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 10/15/2017 1:01:00 PM
a beautiful heartfelt poem Sandra it made me feel quite emotional reading this today:-( hugs jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/18/2017 10:18:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jan. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/15/2017 7:46:00 AM
Sandra my heart felt each word and agreed with each one a favorite for this fragile heart...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/15/2017 8:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, Michael, for your visit and kind, supportive comments and fav for my poem. Much appreciated! Sandra
Date: 10/14/2017 10:51:00 PM
Well written Sandra with lots of truth and spirit. Looks like a real winner. Best of luck with it,
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/15/2017 8:24:00 AM
Thank you very much, Janis, for such a positive and uplifting comment and best wishes for the contest. Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/14/2017 10:38:00 PM
Fantastic pen Sandra! A wonderful composition for this contest :) my best to you! xomo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/15/2017 8:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, Maureen, for your visit and uplifting comment! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/14/2017 10:14:00 PM
Great description of the fragile heart. Lovely!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/15/2017 8:22:00 AM
Thank you, Kim, for your lovely comment. Yes, hearts are very fragile! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/14/2017 8:46:00 PM
This is such beautiful poetry Sandra, I could feel each and every line, and this is a fav!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/15/2017 8:20:00 AM
Thank you so much, Arthur, for your encouraging and supportive comments. I appreciate them so much. Sandra
Date: 10/14/2017 7:12:00 PM
Nice. Lovely poem. Excellent use of anaphora. A universal theme as well. Thanks for sharing.............peace!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/15/2017 8:20:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and very supportive comments, Richard! Much appreciated. Sandra
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