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How Doth

How doth your face light up my life with your winning winsome smile? How doth your fair hair set me afire as it blows carelessly in the breeze? How doth your touch make me quiver as you stroke with gentle hands? How doth you thrill my every sense as you collect me up into your arms? How doth your strong limbs hold me in closeness that enthrals my heart? how doth just the sight of you make me know that you love me?

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Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/3/2014 4:31:00 AM

Excellent. Very romantic write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/2/2014 6:54:00 PM

Hi Shadow: Romantic questions that cannot be answered. Great write! I always enjoy your contests and thanks for the comment on my poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/2/2014 11:04:00 AM

- Oh .... so beautiful and romantic, Shadow! - All the best to you dear friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Palmer

Date: 7/2/2014 6:41:00 AM

nice write Shadow

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/2/2014 5:04:00 AM

Ahh!! Romantic..Enjoyed reading your work that reminds me of years gone by that is the language..Thanks for the visit to my page to tell me of the placement in your contest..I appreciate you reading it and finding it worthy of the winners' list..We need another storm to cool it down again..It is hot out there now..Sara

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/2/2014 12:14:00 AM

Sweet and Sexy Shadow! Thanks for hosting a great contest. I appreciate you picking my poem. Hugs Rick