Connie Gildersleeve Poet Light Verse

How Does It End

Quill n hand
Ink is black
Words frothing

Lost in thought
Words breathed forth
And set free

Two souls meet
Blend as one
Passion ooze

In the night
Dim of moon
Lust or love

Writer knows
He leaves it
To our thoughts

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David Williams March 7, 2013 at 1:13 PM belated congrats on your win...David Connie Gildersleeve March 7, 2013 at 2:46 PM Davis thank you for your congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

David Fisher March 5, 2013 at 8:09 AM Way to go in the contest! Connie Gildersleeve March 7, 2013 at 2:46 PM Thanks David. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Barbara Gorelick March 5, 2013 at 7:16 AM Congrats on your success with this form..new to me. BG Connie Gildersleeve March 7, 2013 at 2:48 PM Barbara thank you for your kind comment and for your congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Lori Lucas Mcclure March 5, 2013 at 5:04 AM Congratulations on your second place win with this amazing write! Lori Connie Gildersleeve March 5, 2013 at 10:41 AM Thank you Lori for your congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles Connie

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 5, 2013 at 1:48 AM Congratulations once more Connie, this contest was beyond me xx Connie Gildersleeve March 5, 2013 at 10:42 AM Thanks Mandy for stopping by and for your congrats. Much appreciated. connie

Donna Jones March 4, 2013 at 7:26 PM Congratulations..:-) Connie Gildersleeve March 5, 2013 at 10:45 AM Thank you Donna for your congrats. Much appreciated. Connie

Debra Squyres March 4, 2013 at 6:58 PM I like this... "To our thoughts" .. good ending !! Congrats on your win !! Connie Gildersleeve March 5, 2013 at 10:46 AM Thank you Debra for your congrats. Much appreciated. Connie

Painted Hunter March 4, 2013 at 12:37 PM Very cool one, Connie....Great Win! Connie Gildersleeve March 5, 2013 at 10:49 AM Caleb thank you for you comment. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A March 4, 2013 at 10:09 AM Hi Connie, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA

Tahera Mannan March 3, 2013 at 9:55 PM Warmest congrats on this super win Connie. Connie Gildersleeve March 4, 2013 at 5:08 AM Thank you for the congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Debbie Guzzi February 12, 2013 at 7:16 PM Thanks for reading my writes, I have enjoyed yours this evening. Light & love Connie Gildersleeve February 14, 2013 at 9:45 AM Thanks Debbie for stopping by and for your comment. Happy Valentine's Day. Warm Smiles, Connie

Richard Lamoureux February 12, 2013 at 9:12 AM Lots of intermingling thoughts here. I enjoyed the imagery. Connie Gildersleeve February 14, 2013 at 9:46 AM Thank you Richard for stopping by and for your comment. Happy Valentines's Day. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich February 10, 2013 at 11:06 PM oooh, I love that one "words frothing" what a cool image. You did a great job of making a series of this form. Luv, Andrea Connie Gildersleeve February 11, 2013 at 12:40 PM Thank you Andrea for your comment and stopping by. I had fun writing in the Epi style. Warm Smiles, Connie

S.Jagathsimhan Nair February 10, 2013 at 6:07 PM Thnx Connie for the visit. This is quite good!! Jag Connie Gildersleeve February 11, 2013 at 12:41 PM Thanks Jag for stopping by and for your comment. I appreciate it . Warm Smiles, Connie

Russell Sivey February 10, 2013 at 4:40 PM This is a wonderful and tremendous entry into the Ellip contest! I have yet to make an entry but will do so soon! Yours is spectacular, I really enjoyed reading it this evening! What a fine piece, Great Work!! Connie Gildersleeve February 11, 2013 at 12:44 PM Thank you Russell for your comment and for stopping by. I really wasn't sure of the Epi style. But gave it a try. Warm Smiles, Connie

Roy Jerden February 10, 2013 at 3:23 PM Reminds me of a SF story I read once where lovers used a drug called "merge", I think. It melted them down for a certain period and they oozed together into a single mass for awhile, the ultimate blending. Loved the poem. Connie Gildersleeve February 11, 2013 at 12:46 PM Did you not like the word Frothy?

Donna Jones February 10, 2013 at 3:11 PM I liked this one..very nice Connie Gildersleeve February 11, 2013 at 12:47 PM Thanks for stopping and for your comment. Warm Smiles, Connie