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How Does It End

Quill n hand
Ink is black
Words frothing

Lost in thought
Words breathed forth
And set free

Two souls meet
Blend as one
Passion ooze

In the night
Dim of moon
Lust or love

Writer knows
He leaves it
To our thoughts

Copyright © Connie Gildersleeve | Year Posted 2013

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David Williams Date: 3/7/2013 1:13:00 PM belated congrats on your win...David Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/7/2013 2:46:00 PM Davis thank you for your congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

David Fisher Date: 3/5/2013 8:09:00 AM Way to go in the contest! Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/7/2013 2:46:00 PM Thanks David. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Barbara Gorelick Date: 3/5/2013 7:16:00 AM Congrats on your success with this form..new to me. BG Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/7/2013 2:48:00 PM Barbara thank you for your kind comment and for your congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Lori Lucas Mcclure Date: 3/5/2013 5:04:00 AM Congratulations on your second place win with this amazing write! Lori Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/5/2013 10:41:00 AM Thank you Lori for your congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles Connie

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 3/5/2013 1:48:00 AM Congratulations once more Connie, this contest was beyond me xx Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/5/2013 10:42:00 AM Thanks Mandy for stopping by and for your congrats. Much appreciated. connie

Donna Jones Date: 3/4/2013 7:26:00 PM Congratulations..:-) Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/5/2013 10:45:00 AM Thank you Donna for your congrats. Much appreciated. Connie

Debra Squyres Date: 3/4/2013 6:58:00 PM I like this... "To our thoughts" .. good ending !! Congrats on your win !! Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/5/2013 10:46:00 AM Thank you Debra for your congrats. Much appreciated. Connie

Painted Hunter Date: 3/4/2013 12:37:00 PM Very cool one, Connie....Great Win! Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/5/2013 10:49:00 AM Caleb thank you for you comment. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/4/2013 10:09:00 AM Hi Connie, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 3/3/2013 9:55:00 PM Warmest congrats on this super win Connie. Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/4/2013 5:08:00 AM Thank you for the congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/12/2013 7:16:00 PM Thanks for reading my writes, I have enjoyed yours this evening. Light & love Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 2/14/2013 9:45:00 AM Thanks Debbie for stopping by and for your comment. Happy Valentine's Day. Warm Smiles, Connie

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/12/2013 9:12:00 AM Lots of intermingling thoughts here. I enjoyed the imagery. Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 2/14/2013 9:46:00 AM Thank you Richard for stopping by and for your comment. Happy Valentines's Day. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/10/2013 11:06:00 PM oooh, I love that one "words frothing" what a cool image. You did a great job of making a series of this form. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 2/11/2013 12:40:00 PM Thank you Andrea for your comment and stopping by. I had fun writing in the Epi style. Warm Smiles, Connie

S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 2/10/2013 6:07:00 PM Thnx Connie for the visit. This is quite good!! Jag Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 2/11/2013 12:41:00 PM Thanks Jag for stopping by and for your comment. I appreciate it . Warm Smiles, Connie

Russell Sivey Date: 2/10/2013 4:40:00 PM This is a wonderful and tremendous entry into the Ellip contest! I have yet to make an entry but will do so soon! Yours is spectacular, I really enjoyed reading it this evening! What a fine piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 2/11/2013 12:44:00 PM Thank you Russell for your comment and for stopping by. I really wasn't sure of the Epi style. But gave it a try. Warm Smiles, Connie

Roy Jerden Date: 2/10/2013 3:23:00 PM Reminds me of a SF story I read once where lovers used a drug called "merge", I think. It melted them down for a certain period and they oozed together into a single mass for awhile, the ultimate blending. Loved the poem. Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 2/11/2013 12:46:00 PM Did you not like the word Frothy?

Donna Jones Date: 2/10/2013 3:11:00 PM I liked this one..very nice Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 2/11/2013 12:47:00 PM Thanks for stopping and for your comment. Warm Smiles, Connie