How Do You Say Goodbye

I hasten to converse with my brother Don ere it is too late,
To say goodbye to my brother who lies in a perilous state.
Lord, I pray for soothing words as he begins his eternal bourne,
To be welcomed by You when from these earthly bonds he's shorn.

Should I reminisce about the good times when life was more sublime,
Growing up in The Great Depression when we scarcely had a dime?
Should I mention how thankful we were for our Godly Mother and Dad,
Who directed us to His paths and saw that we were fed and clad?

Should I salute him and thank him for his valiant service to this nation,
As he defended our precious freedoms - he faithfully fulfilled that obligation.
Should I remind him that as a Peacemaker he'll be an honored son,
By God Who'll place a crown upon his brow when his final race is run?

Should I remind him that he faithfully served Your people while on earth;
That he served his fellow citizens with enthusiasm and pithy mirth!
Should I remind him of his love for family and how very much he sacrified?
What a glorious moment 'twill be when he reaches out to touch the Face of Christ?

Or, would it be best if I kissed him upon his brow and simply held his hands,
And whispered in his ear, "I love you, Don!  Let go!  Your family understands!"
Lord, I pray for the right things to do and say as he begins his eternal bourne.
Please enfold him in Thy loving arms when from these earthly bonds he's shorn!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Pettit Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 10:06 PM
I'm sorry to hear about your brother and the state he's in. Reading this reminded me of my late grandmother who suffered for six months until she passed in May of 1979. Another fine write, Bob
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August 12, 2012 at 7:10 PM
It seems to be that you are having more than your share of worry and sadness. And yet, in so many ways, you continue to cheer the rest of us, and we can learn by your example to be even kinder and gracious to one another. I'm so sorry for these difficulties, Bob. Prayers for you, our friend.
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August 7, 2012 at 6:57 PM
This is beautiful - it made me cry. I think that the hardest time to say goodbye is - when you know that they are not coming back. I am sure that God will have a special place for your brother. Lucilla
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August 5, 2012 at 10:39 PM
This is a loving tribute for your brother. I hope his passage will be peaceful and in time, you will only have the good memories of your brother. Take care, sending my sincere love and wishes. Lee
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July 30, 2012 at 3:50 PM
When the time comes you will know just what to say. I'm sorry to hear you have a love one so ill. When God Takes him home what a journey that will be. The holy angels will carry him across the great Jordan. I'll be praying that God will give you the right things to say. God bless you my dear friend.
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July 30, 2012 at 2:42 PM
This is a most precious write, Robert. so sorry for what has happened in your family. He had to be one awesome man. By the way, thanks for letting me know my sonnet was being featured. LUv, Andrea
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July 27, 2012 at 11:07 PM
Wonderful..its just what I needed..BG
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July 26, 2012 at 6:55 PM
Dear Bob, may strenght be with you and your family through this difficult time. Never say goodbye for he will live on in your hearts forever. Hugs
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July 24, 2012 at 6:42 AM
Dear Bob - My thoughts on reading your loving poem are that whatever you say, he will hear it and feel it. Don't say anything at all and he'll know it. I am so sorry he has to leave you in grief but it sounds as though you each know there is something great to come. I'll keep you in my prayers. love, Kathy
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July 24, 2012 at 2:01 AM
My prayers are for you and yours dear poet. As for your query in this Title....your fifth stanza seems warm and filled with love, and I hope I am sent off this way dear sir when it's my turn to smell my last. Hang in there soldier. (My greatest respect for you CMSgt !) May your days be filled with strength Robert ! Have a blessed week my friend....much love, james
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July 22, 2012 at 4:13 PM
bob, i've been wondering where you've been and now i know. i'm so sorry about your brother, but you've done him proud with this very touching and beautiful write.
Williams Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 2:04 PM
Bob, it happened to my father, only difference is he was 61, never saw retirement, he wanted to go, and to this day I will always believe he looked happy moments before he went, take care Bob...Dave
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July 22, 2012 at 11:39 AM
Bob, magnificent write, a wondeful dedication to your brother in these obviously very difficult times, a decision to be given lots of thought, my thoughts and prayers are with yours and his families...best of luck..David
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July 22, 2012 at 9:45 AM
Robert, so sorry for the departure of your brother. Life is nothing you just have to take heart and take good care of the rest family members. You have written a good poem about your brother's life. The Lord will give him a place in His kingdom.
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July 22, 2012 at 3:04 AM
Bob H., this is a hard subject... I'm not one to handle goodbyes... love your verse...pd
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July 22, 2012 at 3:02 AM
A moving piece in honor of your brother Bob.. It is never easy to say goodbye.. Wishing you and the rest of your family peace in this difficult time. Love and a blessed Sunday to you ;) Wilma
Song Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 11:21 PM
Robert,...I am stirred to the depths of my soul to read this spirited query of how to react at your dear brother's bedside...somehow I know that with your Christian like sensitivity, u have shared all these important things already over the years. The loving arms of our Lord are outstretched and ready to receive him...I just know that u were an incredible brother and friend! I held off emailing while u were traveling...sending kindest regards to u and Vera while u are on the road traveling...gwendolen
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July 21, 2012 at 9:14 PM
oh Bob so sorry to learn of your brother's health issue .. a tunning tribute u wrote in his honor my friend amid all the tragedy your beautiful State is enduring once again from the horror of the movie massacre.. our hearts and prayers are with u and family for Cecil and for Colorado.. tragedy kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkbrings people closer .. suffering and loss make one understand how precious life is.. we will light a candle for Cecil and Aurora..
Palmer Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 8:11 PM
got a poem HEAVEN,think you should read,think it will give a little comfort,thanks for the comment,heart felt Robert
Palmer Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 7:38 PM
sad write Robert,sank my heart,my friend a 20 year old footballer recently found out he has cancer in his leg,not taking it well
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July 21, 2012 at 7:19 PM
I'm so sorry about your brother, Bob. You have written a beautiful poem reflecting on his life. So good to know he knows the Lord and has a heavenly home awaiting him. May God bless you both with His comfort and peace during this difficult time. Love, Kim
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July 21, 2012 at 5:30 PM
I'm sorry to hear of your brother, my heart goes out to you my friend! May his last days be bright and full of love! This is a wonderful poem dedicated to him Bob! I really enjoyed the incredible nature of the love throughout the write! What an awesome piece! Great Work!!
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July 21, 2012 at 4:18 PM
A very moving poem bob - It is never easy to say Goodbye. - Thank you for sharing this touching write. - God bless your brother - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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