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The big beautiful tree,
meant Christmas to me.
All the little white lights were lit,
shinning down on the skirt that had been knit.
Very bright paper wrapped all the boxes,
some had a print of foxes.
I could hardly wait for Christmas morning to arrive,
now into the gifts I would dive.
My curiosity was in full bloom.
I opened one by one each lovely gift with zoom.
When I came upon your gift I could not believe my eyes,
your gift was filled with all lies.
I have been hurt by your evil ways,
Good-bye is all I can say.
Date Written:1/22/2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 1/22/2023 4:02:00 PM
You did it aptly for the contest, Paula. Enjoyed reading your well-poem. Good luck with the contest
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Date: 1/22/2023 12:50:00 PM
Wow what a twist! Well written Paula :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/22/2023 1:55:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my twist. Have a blessed day/week.........................
Date: 1/22/2023 11:43:00 AM
- You're doing it right ... say goodbye ... we can't trust liars - Great for the contest, good luck, Paula :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/22/2023 1:54:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your good luck. You are right when you say, "we can't trust liars." Have a blessed day/week.........................

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