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How Cold Is a Heart

How cold is a heart, that sees no light, continuing the battle, mistaking wrong for right. How blind are the eyes, that refuse to see, kindness offered, always within reach. How sad are the days, to be spent alone, as if there is no conscience, and no kindness is shown. A rebel of sort, clinging to a ghost within, unable to recognize, enemy from friend. How cold is a heart, that chooses to be alone, forgetting the importance, time is moving on.

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Date: 2/21/2011 3:55:00 PM
Great thoughts penned..I am glad that I selected this one to read this eve..Sara
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Date: 3/12/2009 9:47:00 PM
Smile~Your heart isn't cold dear lady~and that's all that matters to myself~Smile~"Hello Again Beautiful Christy Hardy!!!"~I love Your message here to those whom may be missing possibly there only chance within this lifes moment, to ever truly live or know love!!? "Excellent excellent write dear lady!!!"~"My Love Eternally To 'You and Your Loves,' Forever Christy, John!!!"~Sweet Dreams Dear!!!:)
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Date: 3/12/2009 6:15:00 AM
And time just continues doesn't it? Another terrific write that really gets to the heart of the matter in the relationship. Michael
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Date: 3/10/2009 1:24:00 PM
Dear Christy: What a powerfully written poem. You have espressed yourself well here. I can feel your emotions coming through in it. Thanks for reading my poem. So very glad you enjoyed it. Love, Janice Herzog xoxo
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Date: 3/9/2009 8:41:00 AM
I can answer that question - If you were to take a metal bucket of ice water out on the middle of a frozen lake and leave it overnight that bucket would be almost as cold as my heart before I found the Lord - i was so consumed with anger and hate that it was all I could feel - Violence was a part of my life in fact it was my life - Though now I have the heart and loyalty of a puppy - Praise God is all I can say, YF4L - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 3/9/2009 5:20:00 AM
Some people just boggle my mind. For some reason they are unable to see, and just don't 'get it'. Perhaps there is a reason and one day we/they will know. Hope it won't be too late. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/8/2009 9:21:00 PM
This is good I enjoyed it very much. Only love can melt a heart, and God is love. Margie
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Date: 3/8/2009 8:12:00 PM
Sometimes we all cling to those ghosts within, it's just knowing when to let go. This is a sad write, I pray all is well, your friend, Ron
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Date: 3/8/2009 6:10:00 PM
One day maybe this person will reconize the true Light and that heart of stone will turn to soft clay, the Potter's wheel can get tough before it gets just like the Potter wants it,I will always stand on Faith for this to happen,God Bless you my dear,for I know this is tough on you,love you,Marie
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Date: 3/8/2009 5:36:00 PM
Christy wonderful job and sadly true.
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Date: 3/8/2009 4:57:00 PM
Beautiful Job well done Cristy. I love this write. Alan Fitz
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Date: 3/8/2009 4:56:00 PM
Very good verse. As to the concept perhaps the person is not cold? Perhaps the person has been hurt one too many times already? Perhaps? Light & Love
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