How Can a Man

Can you see that it's time
With no watch on your arm
Is there hope to survive
If you've done bought the farm
When all things feel right
Does the moment just flow

How can a man say
What he doesn't know

If your neck deep in the stream
Shouldn't you know how to swim
If there's truth in the ring
Should you step out and give in
Do all mountain tops
Come with a slope

How can a man reach the heights
If his life view is low

Are you late to the central
In Eastern time
If it's really that simple
Then why's it so hard to find
Have you often faltered
Where you've clearly been

How can a man love
If he's never let love in

If your deep in the dream
Can you be what you want to be
If your dream was a train
Would it run out of steam
Could you hold onto the promise
If the words aren't there to lend

How can a man start over
Once he's reached his end
MH

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/13/2017 11:36:00 AM
So much to ponder here.Indeed we need to have love to be able to share love...Awesome.
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Date: 3/13/2017 9:45:00 AM
Food for thought profound poem Mike; we shouldn't wait till the end to get a 2nd chance at life/love! A gem that I enjoyed~Che :)
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Date: 3/13/2017 7:59:00 AM
Really nice write Mike. As Heidi said, a few reads to absorb. It does posses sadness, but hope in the question. I have a dear friend I would send this to, alas, nothing can be told to someone who already knows everything ;) A seven for this splendid musing.
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Date: 3/13/2017 7:51:00 AM
A thought provoking poem , with expression of deep sadness too. Worth reading a couple times.
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