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This does not represent the views of where i work, it is meant to be a bit silly.

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What size is yours? How big’s your pride? When do you take it out? Where does it sit on your ride of life? Does it make you scream and yell and shout? Did you earn this pride throughout your life? Were you given this gift from birth? Have you shown many people? And do you know its worth? Well, I use mine each and every day, Mine’s big and strong and loud, I use at the end of each working day, When I want to get around, Mine’s warm inside, leather bound, Reliably tried and true, She’s my high powered shiny classic car, That I keep looking new.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/13/2019 7:36:00 AM
Well written, Lewis. Great tempo.
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Date: 8/19/2018 8:59:00 AM
Ooh I'd love to hear that ;) I love the resting heartbeat of a well loved machine. xomo
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Date: 8/17/2018 6:01:00 PM
Trump is President with pure pride, You can depict inside and outside; Must admit, Stretched a bit, And about it often he lied and lied.
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Date: 8/17/2018 12:24:00 AM
A favorite poem, Lewis. I like every aspect of it, including the brave and honest self reflection.
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