How ? ( Show Me ) Part 2

show me what to do
show me how to please you
let me touch you
let me hold you
can i make love to you....
in a way we will remember
can i satisfy you....
to your satisfaction
watch me play my part
to make us a whole not an individual
watch me plan a future
that we can both share
will you give me a moment
to make sure everything is perfect
will you trust me
not to lead you to a false love
take me as i am....
because i am a part of you
take me as i am....
because i am one with you
show me what to do
so i wont make the wrong decision
show me how to please you
so that you'll be forever happy
and happy forever with me
this is one promise i will keep




Copyright ©2008 Myishia Williams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/23/2009 6:43:00 PM
Wow, I love part two...Very intimate and deep..All these questions must be answered completely.. without a doubt or wondering..You need to know if this is truly love... I hope you are as direct with this person as you are with your pen, I learned myself it is easy to express myself on paper than in person. I hope that they are worth it, and if he truly loves you , he will take that leap of faith and love you as you are.. I loved it..Great write..God Bless You*Tyesha
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Date: 1/23/2009 4:28:00 PM
show me how to please you...watch me play my part..these are a couple of lines that jumped out at me..so tender, so honest...I loved it.
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