How

How could you not see? The dark, strangling madness Seething just at the surface How could you not hear? The mournful pleas in my words Shrieking and crying for help How could you not act? When all around me pieces Were cracking and falling How will you go on? Knowing you could have helped All the while feeding the madness

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/26/2011 11:30:00 AM

I am sitting here reading some very amazing poems today Renee. I am glad yours was among them. Have a wonderful day full of love and joy. Love, Carol

Renee Kelly
Date: 5/26/2011 11:32:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by and reading :)

Cory Long

Date: 5/26/2011 9:22:00 AM

very interesting questions you present, i have enjoyed your work. cory

Renee Kelly
Date: 5/26/2011 9:24:00 AM

Thank you!