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Restructuring of ugly, large, and useless buildings will create great treatment facilities for the mentally deranged. 

housing the mentally ill

We see how this narcissist gloats
D.T. needs M.D.s who take notes
They say he is mad
And Trump's ballroom pad
Should be staffed by men in white coats
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Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 12:02 PM
There are lots of other loons scattered across our great nation . I will say no more.
Beaufort Avatar
December 25, 2025 at 7:31 AM
We do have a glut of very angry citizens. They might want to blame someone for their misfortune. On the other hand, we haven't done enough to treat or help these people including finding adequate employment for those displaced by changing economic tides. There are a lot of men who feel inadequate these days, and they don't seem inclined to recognize the increasing wealth gap that D.T. and company are accelerating.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 6:06 AM
Woah a super limerick, hardhitting too. Well expressed!! ????°°?>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<< Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
Beaufort Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 12:27 PM
Thanks for the comment Zaynab. I'll take a look at what you've written shortly. I've been remiss in looking at comments and appreciate your visit. We try to tell it like it is!!!!
Anaya Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 11:16 AM
There's “adaptive reuse” repurposing old buildings Or there's climate change (shapes where & how we live), solutions for building & living on a hotter planet. Why tear down old buildings with wrecking balls when those materials can be mined for reusable materials? Cleverly done, exempt the Dr OZ numbskull sycophant. Very funny image! Laughs
Beaufort Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 8:41 AM
Anaya, you make a lot of very good points! It makes sense to live with a small rather than large footprint. We have a considerable number of people who just don't want to see the handwriting on the wall. Hopefully, the sick people at the top will get qualified medical help...but it might not be bad to lock them up for a considerable period in an insane asylum. Keep them confined at least until they get over their delusions! Imagine saying global warming is a hoax. Smiles!
Gorelick Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 2:02 PM
Bravo! Exactly where he belongs. That man's nuts--grab him! But beware of JD Shady Vance, like daddy don like son.
Beaufort Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 8:36 AM
Robert, fortunately he's creating a big space! They'll need a lot of beds. It's said that AI will take a lot of jobs, but there will certainly be a need for psychiatrists for D.T., his cult members, and the people (including some corporate leaders) who have a sick need to be like a King. Smiles!!
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