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Brian Strand's Your Choice J Poetry Contest

Housework Footles

I shirk
house work

my spouse
cleans house

I try
she sighs

get out
she shouts

I smirk
no work

I leave
well pleased

all day
I play
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Fowler Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 7:49 AM
Aren't you the clever one Oliver LOL. Congratulations! :)
Mckeithan Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 12:55 PM
Thanks Linda. I try any way.
Layne Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 5:50 PM
This looks like a fun form to explore. Congratulations!
Mckeithan Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 5:51 PM
It is Trina and my first one. Thank you
Meadows Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 12:12 AM
Good description. A funny poem.
Mckeithan Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 1:28 AM
Thanks Daisy
Wolf Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 7:57 PM
Best way, I say! :) Gershon
Mckeithan Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 1:28 AM
LOL. Thanks Gershon
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