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Brian Strand's Your Choice J Poetry Contest

I shirk house work my spouse cleans house I try she sighs get out she shouts I smirk no work I leave well pleased all day I play

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/9/2025 7:49:00 AM

Aren't you the clever one Oliver LOL. Congratulations! :)

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 4/9/2025 12:55:00 PM

Thanks Linda. I try any way.

Trina Layne

Date: 4/8/2025 5:50:00 PM

This looks like a fun form to explore. Congratulations!

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 4/8/2025 5:51:00 PM

It is Trina and my first one. Thank you

Daisy Meadows

Date: 4/7/2025 12:12:00 AM

Good description. A funny poem.

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 4/7/2025 1:28:00 AM

Thanks Daisy

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/6/2025 7:57:00 PM

Best way, I say! :) Gershon

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 4/7/2025 1:28:00 AM

LOL. Thanks Gershon