Houses and Homes

It's said that a house is not a home
rather, home is where the heart is
I can agree with this statement
Of course, I have a wife and 2 growing kids
And when it’s time to go to bed
They don’t sleep on my aorta or pulmonary veins 
No, they go to sleep in their beds underneath a wooden frame
But I understand what the statement means 
So allow me to speak on the family

Consider the coconut from the coconut tree
Its hard outer shell protects the inside sweets
Just like the house that protects the family tree
Peradventure I stumbled upon a coconut with a cracked shell causing leaks
I would discard it simply because drinking from suspect coconuts is not my cup of tea
So when I see houses and environments run down, and condemned with cracks and leaks
No wonder the family inside is broken and weak
We have allowed our conditions and surroundings to go to waste
You eat a rotten coconut and tell me how it taste
A spoiled core growing with bacteria, germs, and mold
Missing fathers, anger, and rebellion causing a love to wax cold

But not all families are corrupted from the outside in 
Yet these families are broken from within
They appear to look okay and sometimes great from the outside
But come in the door and watch the fireworks fly
Though the material representation of curb appeal is present 
Providing a false sense of happiness and security 
The public is deceived like fake diamonds with impurities  
If designer apparel makes you happy like Pharrell,
Refrigerators stocked with food by the barrels 
full sized bathrooms clean and sterile
Then why are parents sad and kids hungry for attention 
While elephants in the house roam around unmentioned 
These are the ills of a broken home
Somehow there is a disconnect in this landline phone
 
What makes a house a home? 
As I said earlier, it’s often believed that home is where the heart is

To get to the root of the statement a question should be asked
Where is your heart?
Is it in the right place?
Or is left alone in the dark
Whether many rooms or few 
In the physical house
Is there room enough in your heart
To love your kids and/or spouse
Is your heart in the place of material wealth and gain? 
Stained with the shame of fame over pain
Performing for the world to see the family movie called "vain"
While behind the scenes there are drugs and punched holes out of anger to keep from killing each other in this house called Cain?

Or…Is your heart in the right place?
The place of Love
The place where no matter how many levels there are to your house 
You still remain above
Above the current conditions
Whether they be dilapidated or immaculate 
There is love, peace, training, and discipline in that home habitat

Home is where the heart is 
Make sure it’s not alone
Cause when your heart is in the right place 
Your house will be ready for a home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/6/2017 10:40:00 PM
Oh so wonderful to read you again! Brilliant pen. You've made my eve complete. Love and salutations dear poet, all the best to you :) mo hugs! ps fave ;)
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/7/2017 4:21:00 PM
Hats off to you, I look forward to reading more. Good luck in the new school year!
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Poetprentice Dupins
Date: 8/7/2017 2:41:00 PM
Why thank you, Mo! You always have kind words. It's been a while since I've written. I've been busy with other art forms and with the start of the new school year, I'm back in the classroom teaching, however, I look forward to producing more poetry in the near future.
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