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House On Haunted Hill

House on the hilltop Very old, falling apart Terror built inside Red rose has haunted the halls She’s put a nightmare within Russell Sivey Entrant into Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver's "Between Nightmares and Dreams..." contest 1/18/2012

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Glenn Sentes

Date: 1/31/2012 6:18:00 PM

A mysterious story crafted in 22 words! Congrats on your win, Russell! =)

Christopher Bunton

Date: 1/30/2012 3:52:00 PM

Congratulations. Well done!

Bob Quigley

Date: 1/30/2012 8:49:00 AM

Spooky. Well done Russell

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/30/2012 8:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the "Between Nightmares and Dreams" contest Russell. Love, Carol

Don Johnson

Date: 1/20/2012 2:16:00 AM

old hilltop house, terror grouse, red rose do haunt it still.... good one Russell...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/19/2012 10:16:00 PM

Russell... like the movie... except no gore... good luck in the contest..p.d.

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 1/19/2012 3:17:00 PM

Kinda gotz that ole' sKooL Norman BATES Appeal! "EEEEK EEEEEEK EEEEEK eeeekkkk eeeekkk..."*the shower scene!~COOL shot-uh Jeager with this one!~ JSL

Daver Austin

Date: 1/19/2012 1:35:00 PM

SPOOOOOOKEEEEE! Red Rose is just a perfect phantom for this house. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2012 10:11:00 PM

Leaving it a bit mysterious this way, Russell! You are really into tanka!! Isn't that an awesome picture Tracie showed?? I wonder where it will lead me.

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/18/2012 6:51:00 PM

Leaves me wanting to know more !!! Best of luck !!