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House of Ruin


The howling wind causes the unlatched shutter
to bang incessantly against the faded gray wood
The upstairs window, that the shutter shields,
has spider legs of cracked glass
A black widow house, if ever there was such a thing
All the other windows of this untended house are shuttered tight,
the ghostly occupants within have no incoming light
The years have been unkind to this old, stately Tudor house,
the once opulent flower garden is overgrown
with nettle vines and weed shrubs
It is in the sabbath year of its abandonment,
fallow is the ground upon which it stand in sullen emptiness
It was dubbed the "House of Ruin" by the local gentry,
not so much because of its baleful outward appearance,
but primarily because of its former residents
They were a disgraced political family,
thrust from the public trough, and forced to forfeit
most of their ill-gotten wealth
Corruption and scandal were the dubious garments
that cloaked this amoral family
The house was auctioned off to pay legal fees;
some family members went to prison,
some went on to work in various seedy enterprises:
Escort services, sham real estate ventures,
cyber gambling and other shady businesses
The house was put into a public trust,
but there was never any municipal funds available 
to restore it to its former glory
Thus it now stands,
a blight to the surrounding landscape
Paint peeling off the rotted, intricately carved oak wood,
granite stone abutments crumbling, ornate fence and balconies rusted
A house of ruin with a haunting visage

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/24/2016 8:43:00 AM
Your skill knows no bounds. What I'm trying to say is, when I think I've figured you out as far as your style of writing is..... You do this and I'm like WoW... The imagery and metaphors in this piece is amazing .Excellent job my friend. Have A Merry, Merry Christmas And Happy New Year. :-) Alexis
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/24/2016 9:15:00 AM
Ty, Alexis. You are too kind w/your praise. I just try to dip into different areas of writing and subjects, mix 'em up like a scientist experimenting w/different compounds. See what come out of the poetry lab. Ty again for your valued continuous support of love. May many blessing be showered upon you and your family. Love always. Romantic Warrior.
Date: 12/23/2016 4:52:00 PM
How I wish I could give this masterclass a 10 soup rating! Great use of words, Freddie. Even the whole world is disarrayed. Well written, my great friend.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/24/2016 9:12:00 AM
Ty, Adeniji. Appreciate your kind words. Have a great day. Love and peace to you.
Date: 12/23/2016 4:21:00 PM
Awesome story telling Freddie; this could be any of our politicians! P & L~Che
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/24/2016 9:11:00 AM
Ty, Cheryl. Just keeping the pen stroking. Love the love and support. Love always to you.

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