Notes About The Poem

House of Cards

tucked away in your castle
master of the universe
isolated bunkered
guarded and surrounded
basking in delusions

one wild card and suddenly
your masterplan does not compute
so beneath you
your house of cards
tumbles tumbles tumbles
without net or safeguard

question is
do you dare
to reinvent yourself



AP: Honorable Mention 2021, Front Page Pick 2025

Submitted on July 17, 2021 for A BRIAN STRAND JULY 18 contest sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST
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Kendrick Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 2:12 PM
Creative winning work. I enjoyed reading this one. Way to go ..Congrats. Sara
Gauthier Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 3:32 PM
Thank you, Sara ~ most appreciated.
Alex Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 12:00 AM
A Very thought-provoking question at the end. Beautiful. Congratulations!
Gauthier Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 1:31 AM
Thank you very much, Christuraj ~
Daniel Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 3:15 AM
Powerful, Line:)
Gauthier Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 12:14 PM
Thank you very much, Jo ~
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