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tucked away in your castle master of the universe isolated bunkered guarded and surrounded basking in delusions one wild card and suddenly your masterplan does not compute so beneath you your house of cards tumbles tumbles tumbles without net or safeguard question is do you dare to reinvent yourself AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on July 17, 2021 for A BRIAN STRAND JULY 18 contest sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on July 16, 2021

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Date: 7/19/2021 2:12:00 PM
Creative winning work. I enjoyed reading this one. Way to go ..Congrats. Sara
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Date: 7/20/2021 3:32:00 PM
Thank you, Sara ~ most appreciated.
Date: 7/19/2021 12:00:00 AM
A Very thought-provoking question at the end. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/19/2021 1:31:00 AM
Thank you very much, Christuraj ~
Date: 7/17/2021 3:15:00 AM
Powerful, Line:)
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Date: 7/17/2021 12:14:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jo ~

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